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seems like a new author trying to get into the swing of things the story shows lots of promise. suggest either varying the descriptions when goin into detail or maybe just not so detailed. I enjoy the details but if they are always identical no point ya know. keep up the good work.
bell became a clock
conveyors??? creators
huh? rainbow and Lolo maybe
wrong name wasn't darren that betrayed
translation?
is white robe male or female pick one already
wouldn't she be the sister in law. aunt would be if she was parents sibling
wait just a couple chapters ago it said this was the thing from dogma realm
burrow
level 10 to 12 is 2 times last I checked leveling 3 times should have put it at 13
mistress second woman
actually magnetism helmet just kept charles out of his head no power boost and juggernauts just protected his head when he run into stuff didn't add power
promising story line would love to see it finished. but I do agree with the naming and inconsistencies. if could get that part ironed out would be much better
should be lvl 4 he hit 3 b4 the Naga world attack
chapter 794 says yes he was killed and the demon king was severely injured