LGToxic
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LGToxic1yrReplied to Chaos_GhostDidn't Ask
The minute he put it on, Liu Yan felt as if he was walking on clouds. Walking was extremely easy. He could cross three to four meters with one step, and his speed was abnormally terrifying!detailGlobal Towers: Starting With The SSS-Rank Talent, God-Tier ExtractionFantasy · Light Tower Ascension- LGToxic1yrCommented"Speaking of which, we haven't met a decent small boss in the God Burial Mausoleum. It feels a little regretful," As he walked deeper into the God Burial Mausoleum, Wang Ye thought to himself.
- LGToxic1yrCommented"Don't be obsessed with the six dimensions, it's just a concept. I think it still depends on the beastmasters' standards. Those with high standards, even if their pet's Soul growth is weak, it can still be trained to have skills."
- LGToxic1yrPosted
I found the story to be creative and overall the writing quality was perfect. I didn't find that many grammar mistakes. I found that the way you built the character development in the novel to be a lot more realistic that other novels where out of nowhere the mc become op or fought like a veteran. Though that doesn't mean the story is slow the pace of the story in my opinion was perfect and how you kept suspense at certain parts of the novel was perfect overall I think this is one of the best Naruto fanfictions you can find. Good job author-san!!!
- LGToxic1yrCommented"Damn you and your hip ways!!!"
- LGToxic1yrCommentedIt was almost too bad this rock humper team was a full team of males, if there was a kunoichi amongst them, he might have taken Anko up on her advice.
- LGToxic1yrCommented"The common thing among us is that we're all knowledgeable about the magical world. To us, solving problems has a different route. For this, I gathered you all. And Edgar, I have another reason to invite you. We'll talk about that later." Magnus explained and continued.
- LGToxic2yrCommented
Lu Fei 😅
After some understanding, he discovered that it was 1520 in the Haiyuan calendar at this time, which means that the protagonist of One Piece, Lu Fei, had just gone to sea not long ago! - LGToxic2yrCommented
I like this fanfic please don't drop it
Note: Friends I have decided to write black clover fanfic, ummm~ I will upload later after writing 10 or 15 chapters, but before that I will upload 4 chapter if you guys like that novel than I will continue otherwise i will just leave it. - LGToxic2yrCommentedThe guy was badass.
- LGToxic2yrCommentedThis is my first time being touched by another man, but it feels great
- LGToxic2yrCommentedNohara Cheng's direction is not his home, but the memorial monument.
- LGToxic2yrReplied to Bubblingx
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Please ignore this Please ignore this Please ignore this Please ignore this - LGToxic2yrCommented
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This chapter has been deleted. - LGToxic2yrCommented"Hmm, Ramen is also good." Choji replied after thinking for a long time.
- LGToxic2yrCommentedHe knew that what flashed on his screen was only a clickbait but at the moment, he's at the lowest point of his life; no job, no special skills and most importantly, no girlfriend.
- LGToxic2yrCommented
Hope you feel better, and I'm excited to see where the story goes next
So, with that, I'm sorry to say to everyone looking forward to new updates, but I'll be taking a hiatus in order to work on the things I said above, as well as learn how to write better action scenes. This fanfic started as just me putting some thoughts down on a page, I never thought it would get this much attention. I think it outgrew my writing ability, and I don't want to deliver bad content, so I hope that the hiatus will let me come back stronger and write a better story going forward. - LGToxic2yrCommented"I guess I should cook it and go to the salon later. I can't disappoint the lady."