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Grimdawn, forever etched in memory.'- Leonardo_Jesus_42331yrCommentedCh 98 Meeting Zero
- Leonardo_Jesus_42331yrCommentedCh 169 War?
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wide blue lake*
Bursting from the forest Magnus saw the long flat clearing of grass that lead to a wide blue like, making him feel both relieved and exasperated. It was so close yet so far, and worse in the open those Yanma won't have anything slowing them down. - Leonardo_Jesus_42331yrCommentedCh 153 Ameris.
- Leonardo_Jesus_42331yrCommentedCh 355 Online Meeting
- Leonardo_Jesus_42331yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Standing Before Cthulhu!
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Dear Author, i have started to read this novel yesterday and it's really good. I like how the romance is going, the millitary thing is so much better than sect, the lack of energy and cultivation by blood. I like this novel very much. One point though you barely speak of the tattoo of the MC, i suppose later in the story it will be more important but is like it doesn't exist anymore because there is no interaction or mention.
Ch 104 Task. - Leonardo_Jesus_42332yrCommentedCh 240 Lambert's Official Death II
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Thank you for the chapters, have a good rest author. But please don't give us information about future in the novel like "...what Rudra didn't know is that in a few years the duo will be insanely famous" or things like that because when the novel reaches the final chapters some of those things may have change creating inconsistency
Ch 176 Jhonny English and Yume - Leonardo_Jesus_42332yrReplied to thealternative2
The author creativity is great by doing the 3 leaders but must be hard to create such discussion between them
"That's why we have to maintain a balance. Are we going to debate about philosophy here?" Jeanny mediated. "Let's get back to the matter at hand. If we give such leniency to the core members, won't that create jealousy with the outer and inner members?"