Patrick_Fultz
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this hits hard and close to home sorta (never been homeless but I work/volunteer when I can at a food bank I have seen the type that use the system and I have seen people even with the help of the system barley living (the worst I seen was a mother of two (a baby and a 4 year old) that starve herself so her kids won't be hungry (she says she eats one meal a day when her husband was around but been worse since he passed away that year) I talked to my "boss" to see if she could get just something more but in the end I wasn't allowed (I was 15 at the time) i toke all the money i had on me witch was 25 dollars from my b-day and gave it to her)
I like the amount of thought the author (i think it a man so I'm going to use he sorry if I'm mistaken) there is some points where the information seems redundant but at the same time it allows the reader to visualize the world a little better like as example (how goblin have a decent amount of intellect more so then most would assume or how mana looks and flows thro the world) these little things that seems like useless information for a good reader makes it like night and day since I'm in chapter 210 something and I'm still using things in the first 10 chapters to help visualize so great work but story development I'm on edge of it like a book it to slow but if it supposedly to like a novel or series it's a great speed (I love it but I see how others won't so it choosing ur readers) ** I love the series and I would appreciate a little cuddle screen between Ark and the female (forgot the spelling) I do mean wholesome snuggle
hey author u are good at writing and I hope u continue. I'm very interested in where you will end up. I haven't read much yet though so I cant give u constructive criticism to help u. plus people who is straight up toxic in there criticism are not worth following it because a lot of the time they didn't even read it and because of ur bio here is a lot of love (hugs u tightly and kisses ur cheek with lots of cuddles)
lol the truck of isekai