The first Ten chapters did showed a better Ash and he was improving and didn’t suddenly became an all knowing, story is little fast paced but good, i would like to see some training chapters too.

Well i am not really into sci fi genre but this book has made a mixture of both, but as i said i cannot really judge it form a sci fi point of view.

This fanfic has a better grammer than first one, the other characters have more story than the Ash centered one like before, well in simple way it is good.