I love the story and the trad can we have the mtl name ?........................................................................................

Can we have the originale name ? ....,.............................................................................................................

I really like this story because it is very interesting compared to the others where the mc is one of the straw hats that are boring. The knowledge of the future is well brought in with a halfway believable excuse for the others.

J'aime beaucoup ce livre car on voit une autre facette des personnages contrairement aux autres qui se limitent à lui est gentil, l'autre est méchant on voit les relations entre les personnages progresser. Pour l'instant le seul point négatif pour moi est ce qui se passe dans la salle sur demande qui me semble un peu forcé.

So far I've only read the beginning of the book and the story looks pretty good but I find the story extremely unpleasant to read because of the excessive number of brackets which makes no sense because why use brackets to describe what's happening I really don't understand.

La première me paraît plus adapté.

J'aime vraiment beaucoup l'histoire car je n'en ai pas vu d'autre sur les éternels et les pouvoirs du MC sont originaux. Le seul problème que je peux voir est la fréquence de publication.

Is it possible not to use special writing because I don't speak English very well and this type of writing does not translate.

Because webnovel readers loves op characters from the start

Est ce le monde d'inheritance ?

So far after reading 19 chapters this story sounds pretty good even though I didn't really understand the explanation about the personalities because I use the translator to read I hope the author won't abandon the story.

I'm really disappointed because I really liked this fan-fic but unfortunately the author decided that you had to pay patreon to continue reading the story

+1

Mira and Cana. DanMachi

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Fuse

Continue please 👍👍

So far the story is good with a strong enough MC but not too op.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍