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I’m already in the server, but how do I become a beta viewer?
This paragraph has been deleted. - StormMaster12yrCommentedCh 1 Fanfics Gone Wrong...
- StormMaster12yrCommented"Motherfucker! I can't even sleep peacefully with my wives… where the hell do these guys come from?" The man cursed. Itsuki Reo, otherwise known as the Leviathan of Destruction, was sleeping with his wives after having a nice time.
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Replace “it” in second sentence with ”which”
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Delete “and” after “marry” and start a new sentence there
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Comma after “jealous”
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Period after “bloodline”. Alternatively, remove “Additionally” and replace with “and”.
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Period after Phoenix “Some were good, while some weren’t. Not that…“
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After MCs name, you can either replace the comma with a period, or add “and” after the comma.
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“I, MC, am an unmatched immortal” If you want me to stop suggesting edits, let me know. Can’t wait to see where this goes!
This paragraph has been deleted. - StormMaster12yrCommentedSeeing that the strongest of them is only in the 8th Tier of the Apprentice Kingdom and the weakest in the 4th Tier of the Apprentice Kingdom, Theo turned to Yuki and said, "Let's kill them."
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Doctor Regina Babylon
Jean was simply wearing her lab coat over a pair of racy purple lingerie and Fleur was even worse. She only had a towel wrapped around her body. Both of them looked down at themselves and then they glanced towards each other. For a few moments, they simply kept glancing at each other with blank looks on their faces and once again the two of them started to snicker. - StormMaster12yrReplied to StormMaster1
Nevermind, I figured it out
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Wait, how was this up a day before the chapter was posted?!
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“You underestimate my power!”
To a certain degree, it was manipulative but so what? He was a selfish man. A man who would do anything for his pleasure. - StormMaster12yrReplied to Dark_Lord_3114
First three rows are a splash zone! *Maniacal laughter*
Rant Valo was currently having delusions to himself. He talked to empty air. - StormMaster12yrCommentedThe situation of kind of awkward… I was quite surprised that Unohana didn't start to steam from her head with that outrageous blush on her face. Halfway through, Unohana stopped eating and started to fiddle with her chopsticks.
- StormMaster12yrCommentedUnohana rapped her fingers on the table. "Balance?" Unohana questioned and I understood her question.
- StormMaster12yrReplied to HippsterWe finally got together after the ride ended. "That was quite some fun" Unohana said softly. "But I think these rides are for excited teenagers… I didn't get the same thrill as them" Unohana added with a slightly sullen look on her face.