I loved the characters and the set-up. Kind of trope-heavy, but a very enjoyable read. Well-paced until the end, which was a bit rushed, but all the ends were tied up which I really appreciate and it was a good place to conclude the story.

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I love your style! And the idioms and cultural sayings that you use are a part of your jokes! I don't even mind that you have to explain the joke, I just love how punny you are and this series has given me a lot of insight into tropes I otherwise wouldn't recognize. Your writing always makes me laugh and I look forward to your new chapters the most. I realize all writers must grow, but I wouldn't change the style of this series just because of some naysayers. Let them read something else; your fans love you!

I thought it had to do stars? So together they're the sun and the stars?

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