Those four words.... "I believe you"? Fix this. It's three.

Seems no one did anything to intervene- counseling, etc. A four year old is malleable

The description of "lips spasmed" is used so frequently. It is used to describe characters faces when they seem happy, amused, angry, disappointed, confused. Overuse is making the word stand out and distract readers from the storyline. Consider revising

The money conversion isn't working with translation here. Also, this family hierarchy business is very foreign and weird.

Each chapter is really just a few pages of a chapter. Even all four that are released daily barely make one chapter. The story is interesting but reading at this slow of a pace makes me lose interest

the characters are so tediously worrying and speaking about proper behavior and past choices being the sum of a person's character. but then Nora is so quick to plan a physical altercation? No. It's nonsensical

the character's inner thoughts are so unbelievable. I have never "not identified" with characters as much as the adults in this text. The children's thoughts make much more sense

Translator: girl children aren't usually called "little fellow" and this keeps popping up as though it were normal

the descriptions are repetitive - moving lazily, unhurriedly. Speaking slowly and sloppily ....but with precision? Seems like uninformed translation errors, in each paragraph. Can we just get a resolution please

Every chapter I read, the conversations sound ridiculous. They are understandable and the sentences are correct, but kids don't talk like this. When the adults are talking- their words are also "off."