hope you're doing okay

sancs for chapter

I like how this is starting bur I'm gonna wait to review until there is more content

ok so I like your work and hopefully you continue to release especially because I like dungeon novels

so I just read all that ther is of this and I have got to say I like this but there are a few things I'd like the author to work on such as using correct wors because they are using gun where weapon should be and keep the characters name consistent

thank you for the chapter

thank you for chapter

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it was volume 1 and for the most part it's written well

I say let it be the odd one out

this is a good novel so far yhe only problem is the start it needs to be either re-writen or edited because spelling and whatnot is not done well until a few chapters in when spelling mistakes disappear for the most part

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I just added it

well the feather seems more important than I thought at first