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Dave_S

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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S1mth
    Commented

    You say that, but sunny could easily kill 1000 normal people back in the real world 🤷‍♂️

    Several hundred humans driven insane by fury and bloodlust could create a lot of destruction in a very short amount of time. Several hundred powerful Sleepers, each in possession of an Aspect Ability, were so much worse. Add the Echoes in the mix, and Sunny shuddered to imagine what was going on back in the great hall right now.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S1mth
    Commented

    No I’m Spartacus

    "That is impossible! I…"
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S1mth
    Commented

    As long as they go through the portal just after the next solstice I’ll be happy lol

    In the eleven months they had spent on the Forgotten Shore, this was only the second time Sunny heard Changing Star tell a joke, and the first time it was actually funny.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S1mth
    Replied to SavorMySausage

    Agreed

    …This was how the Forgotten Shore was born.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    To be fair, a few blood arrows shouldnt be hard to hit it with, it’s an ascended memory+ the crown boost, goodbye messanger

    As Kai and Cassie flew in different directions, creating some distance between them and the ferocious abomination, Nephis and Caster attacked from the sides. One sword shined with brilliant white radiance, while the other gleamed with ghostly green light.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Again the boat wouldn’t be there if that was the case, they must of made it back

    Maybe this was the reason why none of them had returned.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Is cassie seen them Parrish doing this then how did the boat get back? Tied at that?

    Leading the group of staggering humans to the graceful boat, he helped them to board it and untied the rope holding it in place. Then, Sunny found the oar and pulled on it, propelling the boat across the dark river.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Effie would of suited better to this task I think, since she can only fight in melee

    With that, she jumped down and landed softly on the shoulder of the colossus. With a sigh, Sunny followed.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Over*

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Of this*

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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Senses*

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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    😂😂😂

    'Two and half years… that dimwit survived here for two and a half years?'
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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Are we*

    "You and I both are not exactly ordinary Sleepers. Aren't we? Don't try and deny it. Someone ordinary simply would not have survived in this place."
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    How are the healers not falling asleep?

    The center looked more like a shrine than a hospital. Its interior contained both highly advanced technology as well as some of the best Healers among the Awakened. For the duration of their first journey into the Dream Realm, the bodies of Sleepers would be kept safe in specially designed pods and sustained by the magical powers of those Healers if anything unfortunate were to happen on the other side of the Spell.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Replied to LonelyDaoist42

    I thought the same thing, but I’ll let it slip, it’s the 1st thing I noticed wrong and the story is beautifuly written and has kept me guessing a fair bit

    Somehow, Sunny understood that he was seeing the inner workings of the Nightmare Spell. He also couldn't help but think that it looked a lot like the celestial equivalent of a neural network. If so… was the Spell alive?
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Replied to raijuthunder

    Doubt it, mountain sickness sounds like altitude sickness. You get it when rising to quickly, armies used to be stationed for several days to acclimate at certain intervals of a climb.

    'Why do I feel so guilty?' he thought, bewildered by this unexpected reaction. 'He got what he deserved.'
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    I’m impressed better then most the rubbish on WN. It’s not a great achievement on its own granted, but I’ll say this, your writing is excellent and I can tell I’m going to love this. Keep it up

    Ch 8 Nothing at All
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Someone has watched the 100 👀

    Ch 729 Sky people
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy · Eveofchaos
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    Monster*

    "MONSTR!"
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    Fallen Chronicles
    Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
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  • Dave_S
    Dave_S2mth
    Commented

    I take it back, nice save 😅

    "Six years ago, my good-for-nothing father became an Eclipse and lost control. He was killed by the knights as a tainted monster. Because of this, my mom faced repercussions. That damned priest stripped her of her nun status and seized all our hard-earned savings under the pretext of blasphemy. Since then, our lives have taken a turn for the worse. If it weren't for Brian's help, we might have starved to death on the streets."
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    Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
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