Honestly if he wasnt a erotic writer, he would have done a,azing into any pthersetting. would have loved his books, he develops characters magnificently. This isnt even his only story either.
Its been good so far. i cant see snything wrong with it and the character is too overpowered. though i get a bit lost st times on where the story is going.
World lore is absolutely amazing, the snippets at the start are absolutely amazing. It usually pertains to the chapter or the within the next two. Characters change and don’t stay the same. Few grammatical mistakes but that can be overlooked.