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Marshall_Rust1yrCommentedprobably should be Chloee here?
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don't think it is Amanda talking here. probably Shalia?
"Luke, I think you should use Magic Link on Amanda and let her attack with her crossbow," Amanda said. "Unlike your magic attacks, bolts have a larger range, and adding the effects of her bolts… few enemies will be able to approach us." - Marshall_Rust2yrCommented
Something tells me that Jirni is going to pop up in this mission of theirs.
Orion hoped that the mission would give Phloria the opportunity to reconsider her decision of quitting the army and to him a way to spend some time with his family without having to think about Jirni. - Marshall_Rust2yrCommented
think it's supposed to be Henrietta here, not Honoria.
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This is almost word for word what Bai Zemin has said in the past I think. There's a lot of parallels between Lucifer and him I feel like. And their factions too.
Lucifer opened his dark eyes slowly and a nostalgic glint flashed in his gaze for an instant as he whispered, "I fear death? Sure, I fear to die.... But what I fear is not death itself. What I really fear is not being able to accomplish my goal and failing those who rely on me to survive." - Marshall_Rust2yrReplied to Marshall_Rust
I read a bit more into what people were complaining about and honestly I could hardly notice the extra or repeated descriptions. I honestly appreciate them in certain situations like this where we are being introduced to so many new characters and a much bigger world than previous chapters. It can be really helpful to remind and emphasize certain features, so I didn't mind it at all and think it was really well-done.
Ch 482 Mighty Sirius - Marshall_Rust2yrCommented
I don't understand how there could be any complaints. You've done an excellent job at building these characters and the story is fantastic. Not to mention how frequently you're releasing new chapters. I got no complaints and honestly, anyone who does can't be pleased. Keep doing you, Author.
Ch 482 Mighty Sirius - Marshall_Rust2yrCommentedCh 708 Truthfully
- Marshall_Rust2yrReplied to AvanCh 462 Who are you?
- Marshall_Rust2yrCommented
wrong book? think it's supposed to be Tristan here and not Emery
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Transcendent? I'm pretty sure there's not right
The enemies had lost their advantage of invisibility, plus with their small numbers, it had not taken long before the Transcendent Warriors dismembered all of them. - Marshall_Rust2yrCommented
LET'S GO CARTER! Way to go man!
"Miss May, will you marry me?" Carter asked earnestly.