The story lines was a bit cheesy ; but the plot was well described. The setting though was set in past it was nevertheless has an element of surprise. All in all, the quality of the writing was good, however, the story development is a bit slow. The writer can do better to include suspense to keep the readers’ interest .

The cover is not great. it could be better .

Not that great

The story is well developed and arouse one interest. it is very stimulating. I think the introduction should have been too snappy to keep the narrative flowing because some people or a person like me could eadily be discouraged if the information in the introduction part is not well articulated .

The Introduction to each scene was brief and concise . However, there are issues like omissions which can easily mislead the readers or confused a petson if you are Just surfing through before deciding on what to read. For example who is Frank’ mother refering to? When Frank talked about hos mother cleaning the house. It could be the cleaner, relative or nanny.