Sorry for the late reply, the title of the original is just the same and I think that story was removed already because I have it in my library but can't access it anymore.

Honestly, I liked the original story more than this changed one, because the MC there suffered more severely which would give him the "desire" to be much powerful after his regression. But it's just my opinion. As for my review, the story is awesome, clear as there weren't much errors grammatically and the author didn't change much from what was written in the original so for the readers who read this in the past, we won't be confused. I'll be waiting for the succeeding chapters and that's the end of my review.