I am a mysterious man doing mysterious stuff

I think earth was part of lower heavens which was somehow broken off and drifted away now it is going to join the cultivation world after millions of years

I do read in prirate site if the chapters are locked like this one. I don’t have complains about spending. many use fast passes we get on novels we can keep up with like spending 1 fast pass when the author releases one chapter daily...

As the author I am giving myself 5 stars to support myself as well as to encourage myself to live up my expectations for this novel. I am a new author but I am not new to reading. I request you readers to be open hearted for first few chapters as it requires time and accumulation to find my own style of writing. There are few errors which will be edited whenever found. I am confident that you readers would not have to scratch your heads to understand the sentence and read comfortably even if I upload an unedited chapter. I have been updating one chapter per day with at least 1.1k words. I am planning to steadily increase the length to 1.5k words per chapter. I may not release everyday but I promise to keep the average chapter release by releasing multiple chapters a day to make up for missed ones. Now, about the story... This contains harem, you can look at the tag. The harem will be small and will not exceed 5. The characters will not be collections without any personality. There are few business elements. I won’t be going too deep in this part. The first few chapters are business dominated but the focus of the story will shift to the love part and character development soon(Before chapter 10). The business will be in the background mostly because I don’t have much knowledge about it. You may also accuse me of maliciously increasing word count with info dumps if I go too deep into it like employees, taxes, daily operation etc. I am open to criticism and suggestions as long as they are resonable. Finally, I thank anyone who took time to read my work.

As you have read the reviews you would know that the grammar is terrible but it is not enough for the low rating. there are many issues with the novel. The strat was nice but things downgrade quickly. He gets his 1st girlfriend within a day who also accepts all the things he says such as cultivation. She also quickly comes to the fact that he needs a lot more women. She doesn’t seem to be reluctant about it and even actively finds more girls for him. This happens very quickly that itis unreal. All the following characters are similar. They are like ‘I can’t accept sharing.’ Then ‘reluctantly’ accept due to his body which requires more women then bam...they also actively search for new ‘sisters’. All beautiful women he comes across are gonna emd up with him. We cannot even distinguish between them. There is no character development and the world building is horrble. There is no story or struggle. The novel is basically a collection of cliches.

News: thousands of people across the world have begun jumping of random cilffs. This is a trend along with people jumping infront of trucks

I am asian and I don’t understand it either. There is also a lot of emphasis on eyes.’Threw a mocking look.’ ‘Eyes concealed a predatory glint.’ I tried looking at eye of many people but didn’t manage to figure out emotions form just that. You need to look at the face to understand that.

I understand. I have mentioned that business part is introduced in the beginning and later it will be reduced as I personally don’t know much about business(my bsuiness knowledge comes from novels)....I am currently writing the love part. I recommend that you read till chapter 11 and then drop the novel if you feel that it isn’t for you. Thanks for spending time on this novel.

Light yagami would like to know your location

I gave this a two star because there are a lot of issues. The cultivation stages and relams are not explained. We don’t know anything about the MC’s power level. He can said to be strong or weak. Absolutely sh*tty world building. MC is potrayed to be smart when all he does is just follow the system. Sure following the system which is an unknown all powerful thing can be considered smart but he relies on it way too much. The novel is more like ‘system won’t play it by the book’. The story is mostly built upon avoiding cliches and nothing more. This is basically a collection of cliches and ways to avoid them.

So MC is gonna snatch the girl, fight the lin family and discover that he is from esptein family then unite 3 families to take over the other 2 families to make the murica great again

I am waiting for maxwell diapers and c*ndoms

Kinda, he can take and force decisions but having full control doesn’t help him in this case. She is the one doing the managing so the employees would side with her incase they have a fight. You can say that he is a powerless man with the title of king. He would have no influence in the company’s employees. He is only intersted in profits not in the power so giving 1% gives him the power but not much of profits. She would face no threat to her power in the company even if the MC has majority of shares as he is not intersted in it. So she saved her power and profits while ‘thanking him.’

I get that he is paying medical bill for her as he may have inherited kindess from his aunt who pick him up. I also get that he explains his situation to clear the tag of ‘arrogant’ as people would not like to be misunderstood. but I don’t like the fact that he is still hoping to be friends with her. She should be 18 right now. that means that she should be accountable for her actions. she went to a shady place without any preparations and when she got into trouble, she implicated an innocent bystander (he would be injured if not for system) but doesn’t thank him or plead forgiveness for what she did. She doesn’t try to find about her friend’s situation and judges him without thinking or waiting for an explaination.

Yeah...you were his friend but didn’t try to search for him when he suddenly drops out. You just assumed that a best friend moved out from the country without informing you or that he is dead. She could find out about him by just asking the headmaster/principal as which school allows its students to drop out by themselves without knowing the reason. She calls him arrogant without even thinking about his situation. Plus the fact that he saved her from r*pists despite her trying to use him as a shield and distraction. He could left her on the steets or an alleyway but brought her back to his place and treats her like a guest.

I feel that there is nothing wrong with his actions. She is doing something dangerous where she can be killed at any time. It would be over protective if she was a normal young teenager who is going on a date or shopping.

Thanks for the chapter

I was planning on switching POV’s and I will try to summarise their pasts in their POVs Thanks for the suggestion😊

Thanks for understanding and you are the first person to comment on my work👍

I feel happy looking at the author tag next to my name 😜😭