Dorelus
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my dad woulda killed me if I walked out on him
broke the man's jaw...not cool Marcus
This chapter revealed a lot of things. 1. Jason and Jennifer's family has a tie. 2. Jason always trying to protect Marcus because Marcus helped him from Jennifer or her family but if Jennifer is such a bad person why did he let her introduce her to Marcus? 3. They talked about dirty stuff? I hope that in the next chapter, you will reveal more things. I like the story... 4. Jennifer lost a family member.
I really love it, the style but just add more creativity to it
tbh it's great, I think his girlfriend is right ppl should do what they want
Great I like the style..just don't drop it