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Laine_Darvenslee

Laine_Darvenslee

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2020-04-20 JoinedGeorgia
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee11mth
    Replied to BLACKangelmarl

    nah you good, I enjoy the story it's actually one of my favorite, keep up the good work.

    Ch 112 Chapter 112: The Inner and Outer Sanctums of a Thriving Cultivation Sect.
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    I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
    Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee11mth
    Commented

    this chapter fill like I've read the same paragraph over and over again, the author just over described everything with the same kind of description.

    Ch 112 Chapter 112: The Inner and Outer Sanctums of a Thriving Cultivation Sect.
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    I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
    Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee1yr
    Commented

    Why??

    Ch 37 Chapter 37
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    Fortune's Chosen - The Legend of Ivo
    Fantasy · La_Boule
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee1yr
    Commented

    Author please just do a time skip cause you basically talking about the same thing just with different explanations I'm getting bored

    Unless it was a free-to-read novel… if it was pay-to-read, the book would definitely fail.
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    I'm Leveling Up Too Quickly
    Eastern · Safe Sincerity
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee1yr
    Posted

    I don't know where to begin, disappointed so much potential but the Author just didn't care much I mean why give the mc so much talent if his not going to used it, almost all increased of strength is because of external help either he use pills or magical powders I won't mind if he use it one or two times but everysingle time why does he even have a heavenly spiritual root and a supreme physique for and let's not forget how dumb the mc is, I'll just stop here caused it's just a wasted potential.

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    Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives
    Eastern · Brother Mahua
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee1yr
    Commented

    I'm tired of the author saying the mc has all this talent but never actually used them the only reason his strength has increased is because of external help disappointed wasted the potential of the story.

    In the future, as long as nothing unexpected happened, he would definitely become a person who could rule the ages. He would sweep across all enemies from the present to the future and kill until no one in the world dared to proclaim Lord!
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    Fantasy: I Became Invincible By Editing Narratives
    Eastern · Brother Mahua
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee1yr
    Commented

    we already know what's about to happen

    They chatted on WeChat for the whole night and she found out that he came from a decent family, so she ditched Lin Yi and chose to be with Yun Jie.
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    I Get A Random New Occupation Every Week
    Urban · No Right
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee2yr
    Commented

    hoooooooo myyyyy god!!!! my mind

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    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee2yr
    Commented

    why is the mc complaining so much about being weaker than others it's annoying.

    Happy because he now had what Qing Yi needed to awaken her divine physique, sad because he was certain that sneaking by the outpost of the Raging Flame Sect was impossible.
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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern · PurpleSpring
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee2yr
    Commented

    Dear Author can you please stop changing things midway through the story.

    Ch 30 Absolutely Impossible
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    Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible
    Fantasy · Abundance Every Year
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  • Laine_Darvenslee
    Laine_Darvenslee2yr
    Replied to Dr_Radiaki

    That gonna make me have nightmares for years 🤣🤣🤣🤣

    [1] Japanese term for cute
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    My Special Ability is Perfect Replication
    Fantasy · Tuanyuan, The Little Panda
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