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The work needs to be proofread. It's readable but there's a lot of run on sentences. Also some thoughts needs to be organised. Simple errors can be avoided and I understand that english is not the first language of the author. This work needs polishing and I hope it can shine brighter in the future.

I want the other one :(

Excellent read! Great command of the english language. Totally worth using coins. If you like magic, elements and adventure this novel will NOT disappoint. Support the author and let him take you to this universe where you would ve enticed to stay.