why isn’t there a character card for Zhang Xuan like the other men? 🤔

aww i’m so happy that he’s finally feeling better

i think it's just a thought from his perspective. since he knows now that mc is not the og, he knows that he isn't technically her real husband because she had to have lived a different life before she came to og's body

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srsly tho it’s getting kinda annoying. i stopped this book months ago cuz i wanted to wait for more chapters to be updated but the authors just been dragging this on and on and on which makes me want to actually drop it now 😑

SAMME THO like the plot idea and some elements were pretty good for some of them but i just didn't like any of them overall. 😪😪

i mean who knows lol it doesn't seem that most of these novels are that logically well put together but ig he also didn't know that the girl he used to "love" had alr died and was being inhabited by another soul

well maybe it's not the actual story plot that's actually that bad. i've ready hundreds of these novels on here and so i guess i have very critical standards now for how the novel is actually written. like even if the plot is pretty good if the writing doesn't make everything flow and kinda seems cringy (i guess) then it makes me not that interested. i did read that one and it was the different plot trope that attracted me but then the execution wasn't that good. imo, there were too many unnecessary details that broke the flow of the story which made me stop reading it but ig it just depends on whether a novel suits your standards 🤷‍♀️

thankfully it won’t be since it has the second to least amount of views out of all the trial read books this week. but still, this weeks trial reads were all disappointing honestly :/

girl if ur satisfied then just treat him wholeheartedly 🙄🙄 u were gonna treat him anyways so enough with the excuses 🙄🙄

This story....I can't even say if there is anything good about this story. I don't like it but it's going to be picked anyways so I'm just gonna write a review on this so that future readers will be aware of what they are going to be reading. Btw this is from the first 20 chapters so I can't say too much, but I still don't really like where this is going... ps i'm not doing the spoil thing cuz this is rlly long but read it you want to know wat ur getting urself into. First off, the FL is supposedly a cold-hearted assassin that was reincarnated like most tropes. But, she doesn't seem all that much...Yeah she has determination and ambition and fights back and rejects the annoying "prince" that the original body is obsessed with like always where they then start to chase her 🙄 But that also seems like the most basic dignity and personality that a girl should have. Idk maybe I've just read too many of these novel tropes? 🥴 Ofc with the whole training the weak bodies to be stronger and stuff. When it comes to the conflicts between girls like in every story though, that is what I don't like (first). It's always fun reading the FL getting back those mean girls who always scheme to sabotage the FL but I hate it, I mean I absolutely DESPISE when r@pe is used. Idec if there is like catching a cheating couple in the act and I'm even somewhat (?) ok (but not rlly) with the whole drugging fiasco tropes that happen in the beginning (i just tend to ignore it at this point). The normal scheming between students could be like cheating results or creating rumors like always but to use r@pe as an actual way to people especially when they're all only like 16-18 years old is disgusting. Using it on the antagonists doesn't make it any better either. The FL might not have schemed it personally but it was the fact that it still happened. She also just stands at the side like a bystander. She's a gangster so I guess it's not like she's never seen this stuff before, but she even said that she's disgusted with it but still is letting it happen just because it's happening to someone against her. She might not necessarily need to do anything since it's her "enemy" but ugh it just makes me so mad as she even uses it to taunt the girl. It says something about her character and it isn't a very heroic or good description 😬 R@pe isn't good so that's a no for me. And it also isn't stopping anytime soon as it seems like it's going to be used back and forth for drama and an "interesting show" 🤮🤮 Ok lastly the foster dad. Don't even get me started 🤮🤮 Ok so I've seen a few people talk about the age gap but actually age gaps aren't that bad to me. My parents are 10 years apart and I think it's ok as love is love as long as they are both consenting adults where the younger one wasn't groomed by the older one. But back to my opinion on this guy...so he basically adopted the FL when she was like 8 because of the dad of the FL originally saving him. So he's been taking care of her for years BUUUT, he frickin develops feelings for her 🤢🤢 I'm not sure even sure when but he's basically been grooming her as he says he'll "wait for her" which is gentlemanly ig but still not acceptable in these circumstances. He's kinda controlling too which is a no no for me but he's still a pedo overall so no no no no no. ALSO, it seems like he's going to be the ML as this so called strong FL doesn't seem to be rejecting his actions/feelings cuz of her "awkwardness" from taking over the body of the original girl who was a little infatuated with the guy. But when you think about it, she also rejected the annoying self-pretentious guy that the original body used to like so it's not like she can't reject the dad but like hey, watvr right? ://

ick no matter how cute the romance is that's basically the work of grooming and being a pedophile... 😬😬🤮🤮

idk if i like how the recent trial reads are being written... it doesn't seem like they are actually telling a story and are just throwing mostly a bunch of details to make it longer... it makes the story not flow well and the extra details kinda make the focus deviate from the plot and instead r just making me cringe :/

yea it’s a very sad reality. there r many games that used to be actually fun and cared abt letting the players have fun but then became more money minded while charging crazy amounts of money for everything :/

lol was that wat she was eating that time when making that account XD

k ik that the FL and the divine doctor medicine is godly but reading about how the poison that was supposed to spread in like sometime during that same week was slowed down to 2 months which was alr bizarre and now it's another 2 years of it being slowed down. 🥴🥴

pls refresh my memory of which 6 u thought of. rn i'm reminded mostly of ma'am you have been uncovered and now with the brother i'm remembering my wife slaps people in the face online daily or smth like that. i need to be reminded of just a few of the many of these tropes that i've read to cleanse my mind of some of these recent trial reads that are full of FLs who think that they are smart or are supposed to be amazing, but are just ridiculously useless or just one that has too much of the deed happening that it's hurting my eyes 😪😪😪

naur naur naur, the name of this city is the same as that of the city that Qin Ran was taken to in Ma'am You Have Been Uncovered.... Ik it's a little bit different with the marriage thing and the apparent different setup for the ML but the name for this is the same as well as the FL being a hacker covering up for a medical genius who was being chased and is working in a run-down area now in quiet to hide and help the poor.

i thought that the synopsis seemed too similar to itw but reading after reading ur review, i’ll try it out!

i looked up that book and just reading the synopsis made me think that this is the actual raw for this book. not just a copy because literally the whole form of the synopsis was the same except for name changes stuff. wn has also been changing the names of the characters and titles so that people don't find the raws but this might just be the actual original raw for this novel.