they just want us to spend more. it's best to just delete this book. there are still much better ones than this

the chapters are already written, why is the author not updating. guess she is just trying to make more money from her readers by treating us unfair. she want us to pay extra for the chapters. Stupes double stupes

there were some terrible chapters, but this one was disgusting. the author is a sick person. was enjoying the book, but yuck.

one chapter every two weeks, definitely nor reading any more books by this suthor. I think she is just being greedy. because if I spend more coins, I should be able to read the next 16 - 20 chapters

hmmm, look like some Comments got deleted. shameful author

ha ha ha, when we beg we getting one chapter after two weeks, even if we're paying for it[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

this Authorbis a money grabbing witch.

my thoughts exactly. I'm really on the verge of deleting this book, don't think I'll be reading any other books written by her

the author us just trying to dcam money from us, by us paying additional to read the chapters in advance. they did not really give a little bonus for the holidays. stupes

the author wants to make a money, I'm definitely not paying extra money to read the next few chapters

hmmm no updates for two days. I wonder why.

Author youbdid not update yesterday, but only one chapter today, hmmmm, guess I can't purchase additional chapters since there should not be any completed ones.

Author why is there no update? it's not like you have to write the next chapter, we all know that I'd we spend more coins we will be able to read a lot of completed chapters.

no updates today? hmmm is not like the author had to write the next chapter, if you pay loads of coins you can read them. guess the author is broke.

my gosh author, you keep repeating yourself over and over we're not learning we're reading a novel and we are big people. stop treating as stupid.

really Author, so boring think you're loosing focus.

too repetitious,my gosh was the author given a certain smount of words to write. this book is like the sound if the police car the same noise over and over

Author you can't even finish this one but is already releasing another.will this one be left incompleted?

Author you're too much, it's true we have to pay to read your book, but I'm really fed up with the repetitions. is this book going to continue like this? it's becoming so monotonous. it's the same plot over and over again. make the chapters more realistic or else complete the book and start snother. you will be able to milk your readers

Author 2 whole chapters about touching a car hilarious