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I think he is trolling like "yeah bro, take the sharingan so you will copy : NOTHING"
We now follow our main character: Batman! Chapter especially for him, he will replace Ezra. I'm kidding. But not kidding, I don't really like that from the start he is confronted with someone invincible, like Kara. Whatever the reasons, whether she's nice, whether she becomes his wife later, I don't like it.... it's like forcing the mc to go in one direction, he will have to minimize his choices, he will no longer be so free with people like that close to him or after him, even Batman himself is part of it because he is still well above the MC currently, whether physically, mentally or technologically. Even if they work together for x reasons or whatever I hope he won't be on their radar or detected so quickly... I preferred a mc who is totally free before he can literally let even strong people let him do whatever he want, he seems to have everyone on his tail in a few months, it's disappointing. Well, that’s just my point of view after all.
No sorry, it's too much for me. Good luck with the rest of the creation of this story but it's absolutely not my cup of tea, I'm stopping reading the story. I don't like the mc's strategy/reaction, the way Nezu, All Might and the others reacted too, it's quite illogical. The fact that he's being watched even though we know how it's going to end, I don't like that. Anyway, sorry again but that's not what I like to read.
Yes. It's the best idea. We don't care about orochimaru, just eat him
Honestly I'm disappointed with the change of idea, the AI had so much potential... I've already read TDG, no need to reread such a story of a character without too many advantages that will enable him to create something really new. We will see the rest but I am no longer as encouraged as before to read the rest, that's my opinion. Otherwise I see an improvement in the writing, well done!
I hope he knows everything about DC. At least, for now some parts of the DC universe and then when his brain is better he will know the rest. So he will be able to develop more easily thanks to the information he has and which he can use (superhero genetics, etc.) and his nano machine. He will be able to reach the summit of humans sooner or even surpass them. Seriously, if he doesn't know this universe (which doesn't seem to be the case from reading the beginning of the chapter) I'm not going to read the rest. Seeing someone with a nano machine struggling in a world that he know nothing about and has a HUGE power no thanks. Thanks for the chapter ;)