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Thanks! Yes, decided to rewrite everything. No major story changes, but fixed a bunch of issues and the magic system and story get a little deeper.
The author has some truly beautiful prose at times. The prologue starts with a beautiful analogy that sets the tone before we are introduced to the characters. The story is fascinating and tragic and takes a while to build up. It's currently on hiatus, and I'm looking forward to when it returns. (P.S. I love that bird.)
This story is a winner. If the author continues with it, I fully expect it to become a top ranked story on WebNovel.com. Took only 3 chapters to get me totally hooked. The MC is relatable and her reactions are quite realistic considering all the crazy things that start happening to her. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.