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i need this to be released!i want to know more about her! i want to see more of this book. when will it be released??? the humor is great and how they dont gloss over her pain is real.
Love the ghosts! Like the FL character and that she is not a pansy. ML is doing well and looks like he will be a good fit for FL. Doesn't seem to be a professional writer, but is getting better as it goes on. Hope to read the whole story and that it won't get ruined by dragging on. I enjoy this and can't wait for more.
The wording is usable it's just that it would be better as, "get it over with." Other things are the I'm instead of I am. Sometimes the AM is the emphasized word so it needs to be there. Your descriptive use of words is actually impressive. I read other stories of yours and am impressed with your English. I know native English speaking people who will never be as good as you. Please keep up the good work. And don't drop the pregman one, your writing skills are blossoming in it. I love the description of the valley.
Dear Author, I am very sorry about your pain and the demoralizing that trash did to you. Please don't question yourself because you were attentive enough to be aware that something was wrong, even when he lied to you, you were still not blind to your intuition. Be the best Author you can be and crush him under your happy life. Remember, someone who will cheat/lie will have it done to them. Let karma have him.