Didn’t think I’d like it so ,fun but I got sucked right in and read until the end of the available chapters. fun little article. Keep updating!

Good ideas, but aver completion. Tons of plot holes - why did the entire subject of tge MC having transmigrated to that world. Completely ignored the subject. Pills for changing body from male to female. The idea of forced gender identity is still abuse even when gender switched. His parents, ok particularly mom, are disgusting in their sexism. I wou have been suprised if tge mother committed infanticide because she gave borth to a boy. She was willing to kill the midwife just for knowing the baby was a boy. Them forcing her son to basically have a medical procedure (ok SUPER hormone pills here), have an arranged marriage against his will, basically become a homosexual AND TRANSEXUAL, then forced pregnancy. The mother uses brainwashing, threats with actual violence, monitoring, makes choices for her son that change his entire being without his knowledge or consent, and finally uses moral kidnapping & filial piety to force her will on her son. I find all the ideas of this comic & how presented not funny at all, but rather fri ghteningly tragic and scary how tge mother’s midset wins out & a person is forced to chsnge his entire being against his will and knowledg. The reason tge MC is so grest is he constantly is trying to retain his self, gender, and rights the entire time. Only the audience knows he’ll never survive as a boy and get to live as a man. Aad.

If you are going to base your world in the medical field, having your MC be a famous surgeon, the majority of the main characters be in the medical field, then at least do your homework. Get familiar with medical terminology and at least the basics of biology, pregnancy, etc. You state that you have absolutely no understanding of medicine, then WHY WOULD YOU BASE YOUR WORLD/FOCUS ON MEDICINE, THE COMPLEX FIELD OF SURGERY, AND HAVE MOST OF YOUR STORY REQUIRE KNOWLEDGE OF PREGNANCY/OBSTETRICS?! Crazy! If you’re going to do so, then DO RESEARCH. That’s how serious, dedicated, and professional writers operate. While you have some great ideas and know how to write face-slapping dog-blooded romance (you have amazing ideas), your technique lacks professionalism. Don’t mean to be a total downer, because you have great potential. I just think a lot of it is wasted in over simplified grammar, lack of details, and a setting where you lack knowledge/understanding so are setting yourself up for criticism. Good luck.

I really like the smooth flow of this novel. It has more details and is written better than the majority of novels. The characters and stories make you keep reading and wanting more.

The author has another novel once again using these names for the MC & ML.

I like it better when the men don’t turn into idiot love brains every time. It’s too juvenile and easy. Why is Astrid becoming an incubus with a harem of birds & bees? I still don’t see a serious genius level soldier becoming a shy idiot who loses his reasoning over a pretty face with a heinous reputation and serious problem with not knowing the concept of personal space, is famous for being handsy & clingy, and a filter between his mouth & brain.

Too short a chapter. Nice to see that we might find out backstories from Wild’s gang plus their abilities. Especially since their the empire’s ”elite” force.

Because one has the $$$$ and POWER to do so: imagine the power and $ required to do the computer hacking to get the information, then the $ to keep his hot searches forefront, and then the law fees to process this lawsuit. Like it says, you have to be a giant agency (one of the top 1-2) in the entire country to sue. That’s why it’s a novel* approach (*both meanings of novel; new, or a book), obviously not at all realistic for us plebes, only royalty can do this.

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So was it Rong Zi who wrote the Demon king’s story down?

Please may I get links to the parable (with english translations and explanations of the layers of wordplay!)?!

Can you tell me where to find those stories of Lickety - Split and Wontons.…I would need a translation that can relate the layers of that tale?! Thank you!

Yep. predictable isn’t it .

It’s “BITE” the hand that feeds you, very important to get the English correct in your introduction or it looks sloppy. Needs a bit more detail in intro too or it is too confusing. It needs a bit more clarity - have someone edit if you can because your premise is interesting enough. Good luck .

This is all just too darn easy. There is no sense of challenge for this charachtwr when everything is so easy for him. If he’s already this OOP (so smart with such a SS+ memtal strength), how is life challenging at all? The dynamics of this novel seem off. I absolutely love your other work, but somehow this novel already doesn’t give me the same feeling. Why is this work so different than your others?

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PLEASE DO NOT TELL ME THAT ALL OF THE SUDDEN THEY TELL REAS HOW AWESOME HE IS AND IN ORDER TO GAIN FORGIVENESS, GIVE HIM SOME SORT OF ENTRANCE QUALIFICATIONS FOR THE MILITARY/ If you do, I will just feel like Reas is being bribed by the Prince and Astrid is being pimped put. If this situation binds them all closer and it is onstant;y accepted, I’ll puke. It doesn’t work that way in any sense in the real world or how people interac….given the absolute sense of purity, honesty, and goodness you’ve given the brothers as personal/familial qualities. No one would roll over and go ok, given the dangers of their identities you gave them. It just wouldn’t make sense.

I find it chilling that Wulf says to Astrid how he wants to eat his home cooking, etc. and thinks, then ignores how unwelcome and horrible he treated Astrid’s family, before Reas rushes in. The Prince is completely unconcerned about Reas’ injury except for not wanting Astrid to blame him. This kind of person wouldn’t hesitate to do things to put them in harm againif it brings him closer to Astrid. Reas is 100% correct in finding the attention the Prince has for Astrid to be dangerous - the Prince is a violent sexual predator who stalks and isolates his prey from family. Reas is his twin and was involved. The Prince needs to apologize to him too, just as much as Astrid. The steps he has done to apologize to Astrid is wih the intent to see him again. The Prince is just satisfying his internal needs. It has NOTHING to do with being aware of why his behaviors are so wrong and need correcting. The Prince is just selfishly looking out for his own desires.

Author, that last sentence is incorrect. it reads as if it was the Prince that smiled, not Astrid, with the sentence structure the way that it is currently .

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