Sicurri
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Happy Birthday Legion! Your novel gets all my power stones anyways. I love Supreme Magus, it has become my favorite novel period, let alone as an online one. Can anyone recommend any novels that are remotely close to Supreme Magus. I have a hard time finding anything that comes close. Closest for me was World Domination System, but the sequel for that has been on indefinite hiatus afaik. I would like to find something else to read since I have quite a bit of free time at the moment due to personal issues.
"Scarlett had yet to trigger a world tribulation..." - This would be better wording for that sentence.
This is the only webnovel for the last year that I've used the power stones on. I had another webnovel I was enjoying on here, but it went on permanent hiatus I assume, the author hasn't said anything and I hope he's fine as his webnovels are almost as good as Supreme magus. Almost. I'm referring to World Domination System and its sequel. Hope it comes back, a year ago I was splitting the power stones between this and that. However, Supreme Magus has had it all for a year so far from me.
I like the expression curl up into a smile that represents the slight bending or the appearance of bending space and time. That's That's nice touch. p;
See, its fantastic how you balance everything out. You make something incredible, yet give it a downside. Thats how you make it believable and not overpowered. It's where a lot of authors fail, they focus too much on how to make things awesome which makes it less believable that there's no downsides.
Nice, thanks for the extra chapters bro, love your writing style. Also, suggestion. I hope you make a physical fight at some point that uses Cestus, armored gloves that also happen to double as brass knuckles. You don't hear or see anyone using them in stories anymore. Such a sweet simple weapons. lol.
Don't you jinx stuff bro! Lith is like Vegeta, Kamila dies at this point and he may go off on whoever killed her like Vegeta goes off. Like a nuke... taking many things with him but probably surviving. He may make more enemies than he already has if that happens. I think the story is in a good place atm.
"She trusted he would help her survive..." Would be a much better way of starting that sentence.