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people please for the LOVE of god. Try to think in character, a lote of chapters in, and the bases of the character already have been stablished. One thing thinking that this character doesnt fit in your taste and another to say that is out of character/force.Yes, some parts could have been introduce better in with less clichés, but in general this character maintains itself, It was obvious that this was going to happend, since he saved the elves was obvious.Really, so many comments without thinking not for what is optimal, but if is in character and is coherent. Again, It could be better (in my opinion longer parts will be better, but in webnovel thats a risky gamble for everyone)
well im sad no one yet posted this:Truly, a terrifing dragon
IT IS TIME
why? they are cute.look into his eyes and say otherwise
Why so many people dislike the idea of everyone having a system? I find It interesting, and intriging
An incredible new way to obtain magical weapons, not only is distributedd by the wisest and kindest of kings, but also is very cheap
True, I forgot that it also means that
The first chapters are great, nothing particulary new, but interesting nontheless. The problem starts at the 100 chapters, with the slice of life sections, wich became more and more dominant trought the book. This problems becames even worse when at around chp 230 it starts to turn into a romance drama centered novel, with all the cliches and out of character decisions. at this point I hope you like teens romances because 80% of the chapters became that only topic, heavily influence by the horrible and classic trope: misunderstandings. Suddenly the characters have 0 brains to talk to each other as per usual. The game parts are great, but at some point it becames wird, like, everythibg is just other praising the mc as a demigod or something, to the point it feels false or unreal, is hard to describe, but is extremly edgy, even by this genre standars. And if you are here for the alchemist part, forget it, no alchemy here. Maybe once per 50 chapters alchemy is remembered, but just as an afterthought, nothing relevant. Honestly is quite sad, the book started great (thus my 3.4 score for it) but then it degrades it self to a point that you buy a chapter taht is ONLY stats, and in this book, stats are just flavor, they dont really matter. My final recommendation is that only if you like heavy drama romance to read all, and if not, stop at chapter 300 it only will get worse. Anyways, thanks to the author for some amazing reading at the start of the novel.
It has a dungeon vibe, but thats all. The writing is weird sometimes, with typos there and there, the characters are bidimensional and the story goes too fast, making any evolution in characters akward. The main character is a secondary character and the story is writen in first person in present, a curious choice, but also harder to use. To be fair I only read a third of the book, mainly because a got bored. Is very light, but this factor is more of a personal taste. The main character is also extremly naive, and aparently everyone is. If you want a light non complex dungeon "theme" novel, this would do the trick, but not very good otherwise.
Bit a bit he is developing the lich mindset, so beautiful
jist the sense of hunger, that makes the onther side of the needle in a very lethal weapon. He could kill someone of hunger, in a few weeks... Not very useful as a weapon, wonder how it will be used