I tried writing a fight scene for the first time in this chapter. Let me know what you guys think. Also if you guys have suggestions for my writing, please let me know.[img=recommend]

Shameless author here! Yes, I rate it high since I think I did my best. Though this is my first novel, so I'll forever be in your grace if you could support me to make this story better. Criticism are much appreciated. Don't hesitate to point any constructive opinion to my nose. That's all from me. Enjoy the ride!

harem but not that many

I want to get experience first but I still planning to write this to the end. Maybe I'll edit them all later when I got more experience.

Thank you for first review. I don't know yet about that since this story will be a slow paced one.