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ShakaDaran

ShakaDaran

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2020-03-10 JoinedBrazil
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the shorter status window

    Ch 136 136 - What could possibly go wrong?
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
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    Whenever Noah see the status screen without a reason I always skip those. I mean , nothing substancial changed since the last time he checked. I feel like a teacher reading a student essay where they add useless shit just to increase the word count

    Ch 135 135 - Albino Holes
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    I need moreeee

    Ch 121 121 - Merc
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    Gj! Ty for the chapter

    Ch 80 80 - Almost Reaching
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    Merry x-mas!

    Ch 78 78 - Level 03
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    I hope that Noah get an Aston Martin

    Ch 74 74 - Big Evolution
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    Nooo cliffhangers plz

    Ch 64 64 - Nest
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    Good chapter . I think you can speed up the pace a little bit. I mean 62 chapters for 4 days only is kinda slow. I know that a lot of things happened and you wanted to detail all of them but I am sure you can condense some of this

    Ch 62 62 - Hisss
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
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    I guess that they will be even more shocked when they realize that Noah won't be exhausted and that he can blink. The guy is legit op and no one else believe him because of the rank.

    Ch 61 61 - Main Mage
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    As long as you keep the quality I'm down to read more chapters!

    Ch 60 60 - Why They Are Angry
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    "Don't f*** up or we die" Pretty nice way to test a new recruit. Because why go onto something easier to begin with when you can just go balls to the wall on a hard fortress?

    Ch 59 59 - Angry Birds
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    Lol , imagine being Lúcifer descendent and forced into streaming cause you are broke. So much shame

    Ch 57 57 - Stream
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    Lilith is gonna be an amazing support for sure

    Ch 54 54 - Name
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    So many references with so many things! I really like the story so far! Keep it up and go easy on the clifhangers

    Ch 53 53 - Price
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    "Unranked to challanger only PIG how long will it take?!" Good chapter btw!

    Ch 46 46 - PigMan
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Replied to SDIVAD

    Isn't this the 2nd time he meets her? I mean, it's not like she hurt his feelings or anything. And being humble enough to give an apology like she did i would say that is more than enough to forgive the past issues

    Ch 42 42 - Apologize
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    First time I see an Mc that has this concern about using main hand

    Holding a dagger in each hand would hinder Noah more than it would help, since he was right-handed, not ambidextrous. He was unable to use a dagger in each hand independently; his left hand would be much more dangerous if he only used it to control [Hell Flames].
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Replied to Bingey

    He can just explain them on the first time they Appear and then use a shorter description.

    Ch 38 38 - Thief Who Steals from Thieves
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! Just a little suggestion :when you are writing the stats sheet you don't need to write the whole description of the skill everytime

    Ch 38 38 - Thief Who Steals from Thieves
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  • ShakaDaran
    ShakaDaran3yr
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    It's a very refreshing experience to read something that is this well written on webnovel. The story is clean and well written. So far the Mc is well designed and the world building is simple but consistent. The pace is good and the chapters rarely finish in one of those stupid cliffhangers where you curse the authors. Excellent work so far,keep it up!

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