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Daoist_Empereur2hCommentedCh 7 Chapter 6 The Gambit- Daoist_Empereur7hReplied to Mohit_0812Zhou Yuan(Mc)
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Tier 9
This paragraph has been deleted. - Daoist_Empereur7dCommentedCh 23 Deep Sea Blue Heart
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Her and it qiu yi meng who met yang tian at the celebration of the new head of the Yang family
Until 3 months ago, on that day, Yang Ying Hao, the new head of the Yang Family, met Yang Tian at a celebration dinner, and the first time he saw him, his heart felt like it was going to burst. - Daoist_Empereur9dCommented
Can you please just stick to one host*
[Presenter, I thought you gave a very good performance, I thought you would last half an hour at most] - Daoist_Empereur9dCommented
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[No, landlord, what's worse is that they would die in the process of cultivation, after all, Destruction and Doom Yuan qi is very deadly] - Daoist_Empereur9dPosted
- Daoist_Empereur9dReplied to Evillangal389
You can use : when they speak so it can be better Like Yang Kai : hello Yang tai : hello It can be easier for readers to understand the flow of the story When you have people in your story screaming you don’t have to say it if you the writing like this : I DON’T WANT . You don’t to have say he screaming and lastly plis use chat gpt for grammar so it can be easier for you and use to understand and you can say to him to just help you whith the grammar and not change anything else
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- Daoist_Empereur12dReplied to InkosiPiffCh 49 My second wife is badass and recruiting an whole village ! ( 3/3 )
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This paragraph has been deleted. - Daoist_Empereur14dReplied to TrueGodYunChe
No it was 3000
Mana: 200,000 - Daoist_Empereur15dReplied to Psan
Just don’t care take the good of the story and ignore the bad
"But Freya isn't this unfair he just got his falna a week ago, making him fight against your experienced adventurer" Hestia raised her voice grabbing everyone's attention - Daoist_Empereur15dReplied to Recipe_Brassiere
He can have a template so if you think about it he can be upgraded to better
After concerning all situations, yuno nodded as he spoke "alright, then I will trouble Hestia-sama for it"