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well that's first. an ai that enjoys restrictions and being defeated by their creator. If Brian can already do this. why aren't absurdly advanced ai robots already a thing yet? because if he can make that level of ai. multiple weaponized robotic arms and basically controls the world's tech. I don't see why robots aren't already reinforcing the human supers with ease. they should be enough to face most vamps and werewolves.
is past vision the only ability tied to mystic eye? the past description described it just as super natural ability on the eye. so far you have listed night vision, far sight, past visiom, seeing weakness like a scan and and seeming magic or somthing in targets.
seriously the freak out over a quick dispel or counter spell. That's not proof a null mage or a anti-mage. Any warrior that challenges mages and are worth there salt will have a counter. but it could have cool down it could be specific to certain types of magic. Assuming immediately they are a null mage implies they are either broken or a character of extreme significance. there's a reason characters that null characters typically don't do anything other then null magic. it's one sided in most cases if they have anything other then melee skills.
Well, Ely just had her teen years wrecked in sense that she can't become rebellious now. You really can't prove love or parental love stronger then shooting 7+ nukes without heistation. I wonder how the blood queen would react. would she be angry. proable. protecting her daughter is big priority for her. But some rulers see their civilians as their children. extinction of a large section of her own race might be more important then her daughter to her. on the other hand. Will she be Thirsty for brian relationship or perhaps a harem compromise unknown?
Violet is fourth because the guard is a concubine. Blank takes first because its blank followed by the princess and the elf person. I still don't understand what Arius sees in the elf since she doesn't have a personality or ability in comparison to all other characters outside of love for Arius. The only thing we got from that elf was during the quick search for her mother. the elf just followed and said OK to anything Arius said or did. elf feels more like an acquaintance then a wife.
Blank automatically becomes first. Also, it would make sense for everyone except blank to become yandere. Blank would be unaffected by any skill that would turn her into a yandere. Also, any and all yandere regardless of dimension or abilities would immediately accept blank and wouldn't try their luck against blank because it's the blank.
absurdly convenient he just happens to arrive home today. I'm suprised the princess and king hasn't already found where he lived his dad was a 6 star warrior. still not sure what 6 star warrior means in power. But I'm guess a 6 star mage is like 12 star mage to a six star warrior. kinda poor power scaling.
its to show the character is thinking. The choice ability is just as much about character development as it is about power. additionally because this character is more op then your average character, it forces the author to keep raising the bar on creative challenges and and writing ability to describe those challenges. Brave author, much respect. it nice to see a character who is overpowered and still thinks about tactics over raw power.
Unique story. However, I have 5 complaints. 1. I would have like more world building. authors version of world building and be summed as maybe 4 traditional laws and thats it. no info about courages history, founding, tech, economics, fashion, regions etc. I'm suprised about the constant reminder about boob goddess we know nothing about and more importantly we never even got a name. 2. The story has no character development and the sex writing quality suffers for it. it's already unique with breast tradition and nailing the entire family. But, just feels a lot is missing. A jail or freeing them just doesn't feel enough for love story. But gratefullness = mariage here with little build up. 3.MC seems to be extremely laid back, passive and lacking in dialog. I get he's a novice. but it's so extreme that I would give the MC title to the queen because she's driving the story while the MC basically is just showing up and everything happens to him without him doing anything or saying anything. I'm suprised he hasn't asked for armor at all nor given military knowledge or training from the enemy nation since he when grew up from there since childhood. 4. if you going to make an h kingdom it be extreme unique to go all the way with it. the autor kinda did with willingness of the royal fam. But not so much with kingdom itself. 5. I wish a different MC was chosen
Must have been every type of court case imaginable from defamation to trademark. At very least they must make money of expansion movies and then imposed the strictest safety measures in field in order stay marketable. Those moves would destroy a company's rep.