The story is okay but not really all that good. Starting off with a lame Pokémon when there is there is so many but it’ consistently lame rodents. I’m don’t ’ find the Pokémon to be interesting in the story. battle scenes are not interesting and nothing has been discovered so I don’t any new or intrresting moves. Wish the story started off stronger to have more interest as I’m not reading to ch 100 to finally have a good storyline. Thanks for the effort

Have you thought about how the mc will explain why he left. He should make the coach quit for kicking him off the team ngl shot would be mad funny tho. Who do you have planned on joining for after this year?

Another great chapter, I’m ’ starting my own blue lock: be ruthless since there are no hood ones like this for new stories

Diamond no ace: the pitcher returns It’ on Webnovel

Haha this and one other ace no diamond ff are some of the funniest and best ones I’v read, do you have a general Idea of where you wanna progress the story or just on the spot?

Ehh tbh I’ gonna have to drop this. I didnt really enjoy Hinata dating Naruto while engaged, plus there should def be a fight between the MC and Naruto as Hinata was never really his. There is no strong energy for the mc to face at the moment which makes this pretty boring now

Okay yo we need a strong Naruto to fight the mc cuz no one else seems able to and he just got cucked, Come on give us a good angry Naruto 🧐

Gibble

Bro update more. I’ playing the new Pokémon game in the switch and just got Hubble

Yes Y

Hey I like the story but the pace is so dam slow that your gonna start to lose reader

Hey thanks for the chapter what about the move Horus was working on the beach. Also when is school starting Ik it’ slower but any idea on when to expect to see a school chapter ?

Nah have an op suit of armor that’ alive?s

I like how he is concerned w like. You should see if you can make luke one of his companions as he hate for the gods is evident w kronos

Look, you posted r-18 content so I thought that you would include it into the actual story line. But it seems either you will but it won’ be in the story and you have to pay for it. Personally any naruto where the mc is over 20 and there is no r-18 then it’ not really worth the effort to read as the story dies pretty early. Paying for content that has nothing to do with the story line is pretty lame. Maybe add the ability to choose the story to your patreon members if you need money that bad

Yeah fuck no, I’m gone. You want me to pay for chapters, but if you don’t you miss content? I would get it if you decided to limit the amount of “free” chapters at a time for patreon but to excluded content this early in is ridiculous. Was decent read but I hate authors that do that so I wish you luck as you no longer have my support

Mate 200 chaPters with 1 a day is 200 days before you release !😅 good bye sadly as its not a even trade

😭 i just want a good fanfic with her in the harem like it shouldnt be hard tobwrite 😂😂

But no Annebeth.....

Who is in the harem🤔