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  • Ash16746
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    I am confused. i love and hate this genderbent version of harry. I can't stop laughing at the ridiculousness of this situation. Still not the weirdest I've read from a gay sirius black havjng sexual relations with albus dumbledore while bothe of them where imprisoned in azkaban. Or two versions of him existing at the same time. One being an illusion brought to reality being in a three person relationship. Or the harry, draco, snape and harrys aunt relationship. Or the reincarneted lily relationships. What have i read. What have i done with my life.

    Ch 248 Chapter 248: turn Harry into a woman, a deal with Snape
    Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
    Movies · souryourer
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  • Ash16746
    Ash167468d
    Replied to sora_stash

    It was a hidden problem (not mentioned in detail). Blood deficiency is a side effect/symptom which can be treated now that the root problem has be solved.

    Ch 432 [432] Indirect Kiss
    Life As Hikigaya Hachiman
    Anime & Comics · Leonzky
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  • Ash16746
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    Usually pokemon stories are about battling or working around plot. Usually anime or game based plots. This is nice and laid back story on farming and various relationships between people that are not usually mentioned. The various professors. The way new evolutions are introduced. The use of terrain type moves, particulary grassy terain. All of this is unique and interesting. Oh and the various pokemon relationships involved with their trainers and other pokemon was great. It's nice to see a novel focusing some parts on pokemon in a pokemon novel to this extent. Oh and despite a preference for harem novels with 1-3 people this focus on one person being jasmine (one of my favourite steel type trainers, now ground) was masterfully done. The only thing that could be improved is the addition of children (1-2 years story wise) since most fanfiction novels I've read only mention them towards the end when the book consludes as an after thought. Another idea would be including pop culture references adapted to pokemon world. Or mc introducing pop culture to the pokemon world. Can also inteoduce technology or concepts from earth to pokemon world via company shares and deals for percentage profits.

    Ch 112 C112 - Council of Eevee
    Pokemon: A life worth living
    Video Games · Nuclide
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  • Ash16746
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    I watched sailor moon and liked it. I was 11/12. Then i watched the first episode of madoka when it came out it still remeber mamis smile folled by dread as her head gets chomped off. And don't forget the lifeless body dropping with a thud.

    Ch 68 Lost Head & Too Angry to Eat (2-in-1)
    Dad's Comic Life
    Anime & Comics · AngelicTL
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  • Ash16746
    Ash167461mth
    Commented

    More!!!

    Ch 20 Bunnies Are So Cute
    Dad's Comic Life
    Anime & Comics · AngelicTL
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  • Ash16746
    Ash167461mth
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    Psyduck is Torbek. Look up chuckles the clown and d&d hilarity ensues.

    Ch 145 A new stone?
    Pokemon: Radical Redux
    Anime & Comics · Katsu39
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  • Ash16746
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    Instead of patreon go to coffee its cheaper at £1.50 i think. Might be $ instead of £. And you get like 80-90% instead of 60%from patreaon

    Ch 170 Sorry guys
    I Stream DC on Marvel
    Anime & Comics · Mr_Aizen
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  • Ash16746
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    Feoup * group

    Ch 465 Recent PC Game Acclaim
    Tycoon of Video Games
    Video Games · NewComer714
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  • Ash16746
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    Hey, since our moms are playing on our consoles. Why don't we have a feoup session on cod. Sounds like a plan Later in the day... Hey dad... what are you doing on the computer. Oh hey son. Well you see.. while your mom was gossiping with the other moms about this silent hilll thing we dads ended up talking out our kids and one of them brought up cod. So we decided to have or wives have a girls night and we could have our dads night. And thats how we ened up reguarly play games.

    Ch 465 Recent PC Game Acclaim
    Tycoon of Video Games
    Video Games · NewComer714
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  • Ash16746
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    Second time re reading this as i caught up to the latest chapter and waiting for a while to binge read. Anyway... The raptor chicken with robot parts makes me think of robot chiken on adult swim responsible for a lot of parodies. Usially its stop motion animation. It improverd over time. But not sure of the technicalities.

    Ch 124 Chapter 8 - Part 3 - Eternal Love and Avezza
    Winds of Change (DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Fictitiouz
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  • Ash16746
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    Next time you do this r 18 scene, you should do it in one. Or longer chapters. I would also prefer slightly longer chapters as well.

    Ch 174 Chapter 174: Rita Skeeter’s first time part- 2
    Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
    Movies · souryourer
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  • Ash16746
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    Thanks for the chapter but this feels short. Try to lengthen the chapters or keep the same length but have one or two more added.

    Ch 409 KiShin formative plan in auto and motor industry
    Tycoon of Video Games
    Video Games · NewComer714
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  • Ash16746
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    Replied to Life_sa_Beach_

    Im from alpy

    Ch 33 33. Undercurrents of Fate
    Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy
    Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_
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  • Ash16746
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    Sup fellow indian brother/sister. I'm from southern india, you?

    Ch 33 33. Undercurrents of Fate
    Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy
    Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_
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  • Ash16746
    Ash167464mth
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    Harem

    Ch 65 Chapter 65 : Daphne And Potion Class 1 (Bonus Chapter)
    HP: Magic Punk
    Book&Literature · kamidemond
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  • Ash16746
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    I need clarification on what happened in the memory. So her mother was r**ed and was she also..... or what. Did her mother comit suicide. She should be rich if she could have a Bentley. At least in upper and or middle class. She should be mpre cautious. How come there wasn't any repercutions for the r**e. Was this the magical out burst?

    Ch 190 Chapter 190: Peggy's Past (Edited)
    Drawing cards at Hogwarts
    Book&Literature · inferno303
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  • Ash16746
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    Even the pervert principle is better. She is violent, abusive and threatening. She kidnapped slandered and threatened her fiance. She is the worst aspect of a tsundere. She is supposeed to get better over time but doesn't. Great story, world building, character development except for nobunaga.

    Ch 765 Exhibition Match
    Anime Mashup
    Anime & Comics · LittleApple
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  • Ash16746
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    Furthermore the other female characters are better than her. Even her subordinates are better than nobunaga. I like everything about this novel except her. If i was in his situation. I would kill her because i know i can. Even though the easiest way would just be to dump her. The obly reason nobunaga is in here is to add to the collection. But she is the least valuable in the collection.

    Ch 765 Exhibition Match
    Anime Mashup
    Anime & Comics · LittleApple
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  • Ash16746
    Ash167468mth
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    I generally dislikethe time travel thing unless it was a main feature of the game or in this case story. With the tine travel shenanigans, it makes every flaw or mistake a mute point. Unless this was shown from the very beginning or hinted at through out the story so far. One example would be live die repeat in edge of tomorrow or undertale. This feels slightly worse. But the writing so far is good and is not enoughfor me to drop. I have done so before for less.

    Ch 68 Chapter 67
    BNHA: Singularity
    Anime & Comics · Einlion
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  • Ash16746
    Ash167469mth
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    Money to by milk powder. Definitely Chinese. Milk there has a lot of chemicals and hygiene problems due to corruption. So as a replacement they use powder mostly from Australia. I remember this on the news. Milk bottles in uk. Milk packets/sachet for canada and india and sri lanka. I am an Indian livikng un the uk. Oh and the 'y' in 'ye' old english means 'th' the old ....inn or pub or something or other.

    Ch 169 Chapter 169
    Marvel Dc: Bastard Hero [EN]
    Anime & Comics · Mizuki77
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