Sorry but this feels like a whole lot of nothing. Its a bit too wordy to just confirm that this was an invasion to free something from the seal.

Would have been nice to see odin fail and get crushed or attacked by mc for trying to steal his new dragoness. Also loved the... with all my hate i add +2 to charisma.

Hello Ash Ketchum 6164 im Ash16746. Is it irony or coincidence that we have similar naming style/convention.

Who is this character?

I am confused. i love and hate this genderbent version of harry. I can't stop laughing at the ridiculousness of this situation. Still not the weirdest I've read from a gay sirius black havjng sexual relations with albus dumbledore while bothe of them where imprisoned in azkaban. Or two versions of him existing at the same time. One being an illusion brought to reality being in a three person relationship. Or the harry, draco, snape and harrys aunt relationship. Or the reincarneted lily relationships. What have i read. What have i done with my life.

It was a hidden problem (not mentioned in detail). Blood deficiency is a side effect/symptom which can be treated now that the root problem has be solved.

Usually pokemon stories are about battling or working around plot. Usually anime or game based plots. This is nice and laid back story on farming and various relationships between people that are not usually mentioned. The various professors. The way new evolutions are introduced. The use of terrain type moves, particulary grassy terain. All of this is unique and interesting. Oh and the various pokemon relationships involved with their trainers and other pokemon was great. It's nice to see a novel focusing some parts on pokemon in a pokemon novel to this extent. Oh and despite a preference for harem novels with 1-3 people this focus on one person being jasmine (one of my favourite steel type trainers, now ground) was masterfully done. The only thing that could be improved is the addition of children (1-2 years story wise) since most fanfiction novels I've read only mention them towards the end when the book consludes as an after thought. Another idea would be including pop culture references adapted to pokemon world. Or mc introducing pop culture to the pokemon world. Can also inteoduce technology or concepts from earth to pokemon world via company shares and deals for percentage profits.

I watched sailor moon and liked it. I was 11/12. Then i watched the first episode of madoka when it came out it still remeber mamis smile folled by dread as her head gets chomped off. And don't forget the lifeless body dropping with a thud.

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Psyduck is Torbek. Look up chuckles the clown and d&d hilarity ensues.

Instead of patreon go to coffee its cheaper at £1.50 i think. Might be $ instead of £. And you get like 80-90% instead of 60%from patreaon

Feoup * group

Hey, since our moms are playing on our consoles. Why don't we have a feoup session on cod. Sounds like a plan Later in the day... Hey dad... what are you doing on the computer. Oh hey son. Well you see.. while your mom was gossiping with the other moms about this silent hilll thing we dads ended up talking out our kids and one of them brought up cod. So we decided to have or wives have a girls night and we could have our dads night. And thats how we ened up reguarly play games.

Second time re reading this as i caught up to the latest chapter and waiting for a while to binge read. Anyway... The raptor chicken with robot parts makes me think of robot chiken on adult swim responsible for a lot of parodies. Usially its stop motion animation. It improverd over time. But not sure of the technicalities.

Next time you do this r 18 scene, you should do it in one. Or longer chapters. I would also prefer slightly longer chapters as well.

Thanks for the chapter but this feels short. Try to lengthen the chapters or keep the same length but have one or two more added.

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Sup fellow indian brother/sister. I'm from southern india, you?

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I need clarification on what happened in the memory. So her mother was r**ed and was she also..... or what. Did her mother comit suicide. She should be rich if she could have a Bentley. At least in upper and or middle class. She should be mpre cautious. How come there wasn't any repercutions for the r**e. Was this the magical out burst?