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This is a dog shit novel, but one that had potential. First off it has an overly edgy mc, which the author won’t fix even though everyone bullies him about it. Second is the writing quality, which he also won’t get an editor for. Third is the rucking world, like you’ll have the human race be able to achieve rank b, but never explain how they can achieve that level of power, like it’s just expected humans are able to reach ungodly levels of strength. Like don’t fucking create a world of you’re not gonna explain it at all, except the mc power system. Anyone who reads this will just be pissed off at how many plot holes, and lack of knowledge of the world. .5/5 is my real rating
No mine was, u just ignored it. But u should see this, wtf are u doing making so much dog shit filler for random character. What you can do in one chapter for irrelevant characters that PLAY NO PLOT IN THE STORY takes up to 5. Like wtf u don’t do shitty info dumps but instead ur trying to copy mech touch by doing a lot of dog shit yapping, anyone who’s paying for ur chapters rn is genuinely retarded. Waste of a book cuz of the author.
First it was the disgusting about of info, and now it’s the ahit filler from every random character. It’s a fucking waste to make every character spend 10 chapters doing absolutely nothing and be completely irrelevant and impossible to read through. Anyone who is paying for this is getting scammed like an idiot, first time I didn’t feel bad for using a pirated site.
Ye, but it would be hard to explain having a large enough Chakra capacity and without it, making him broken just becomes hard
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