here... hv all my power stone

I don't knw how to feel about this chapter. law pushing himself was unnecessary. cringe tbh. and mc forgetting he is in one piece and thought everything was just a dream... really??

author plz don't turn this into harem..web novel have enough filth as it is. there isn't much quality standard novel.

go read a hentai or something

I've been following the novel long before the hiatus and I keep visiting time and time again hoping the author to come back and continue the story. I can't remember how many times I've re read the whole chapter. this is a novel with a very realistic character approach. if u really think deep about it. if I read any fanfic I like to immerse myself as the mc and if it really happen to me being transmigrated into a fiction. I or any other person would be too scared to mess with the plot line afterall that's the only advantage il have regardless of butterfly effect. in fact I'd stay far away from canon in a most inconspicuous way hoping to retain atleast a semblance of the story. most writers and readers go "F the canon" and go be with the canon without consequences. and they be like holding hands and shitting rainbows. everything magically works out for them. I was so frustrated and tired of endless searching for a good fic and that's when I found this fic. this is ART my man. u r a blessing to this community. and if it's not too much...I pray and hope that you do "one piece" in the future with similar settings.

there you go...donated!! keep the chapters coming and il keep donating

thnx for the chapter

chapters are too short...if it's even slightly possible we would like a longer chapter. and if it's not, don't mind me vending my inner thoughts. it's still a great story nonetheless

y dint I think of that. this gives me the chills

this is gold class comedy. very anime like. I can picture it in my head

no_harem sect is out. it was a good read while it lasted

noooo... plz no devil fruit

honestly I want to read a fanfic where mc doesnt have enemies and fights every turn. I want reasonably strong mc who takes his time getting strong without the cliche tragedy happening to his island or home. and doesn't abandon family for freedom and adventure bullshit as soon as he is drop into that world.. i want adventure with a laid back attitude, relax and enjoy the journey

this is like reading Chinese novel. 'brother vlad' 'old patrick' come on. it went from 5 star to 1 real quick

great chapter though short. hopefully he grows up fighting with just his body. good old fist. pure pugilist

can u plz plz make mc 10 ft tall. wearing hawaiin shirt with shorts and flip flops. strolling in the battlefield like he doesn't give a fk. a pure chad with rugged face. inventory with lotsa food and water tat could last him decades so he doesn't care if he is captured and sent to impel down cz he has all the things he need to last him for many years and treat impel down more like a vacation. dayum!!!

could u plz plz make the mc 10 feet tall when he grows up....wearing Hawaiian shirt and a shorts with flip flops on a battlefield like he doesn't give a fk like he is strolling in his backyard like a pure chad

btw how to I edit this comment and raise my rating. . I am new to this. this is my first ever comment

author regardless of the comment above iam inclined to give u a higher rating simply because this novel evoke lots of emotion and easy to read and understand. the flow of this story couldn't be better but the character of the mc has too many flaws which is frustrating. 1st of all...how wild he maybe he was once a human which should be his core character which I don't see that at all. and of all the flaws which could improve is his threats for instance "if u don't do this I'll kill you or rip your arm off" etc etc..i hope mc doesn't always keep threatening left and right. I hope you take this as a constructive criticism.

I said "lots of" not "all of them". as deleting "all" of the low rating will be pretty obvious.