crabbypatty07
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haha funny, battle squek
hi, well the main MC was a hunter, but at the same time he's somewhat a combat freak, fighting someone strong or multiple opponents makes him feels good, and really turned him on. Another point is most of his fight's as of late is 1vs24 or 1v1 and most of the time he's confident that he's stronger than his enemies. Also, while snatching bandits, I'm trying to highlight his unique ability, and the same time when opponents got attack by something out of this world, they get surprised and confuse, hinders and slowed their reaction. Oh the last fight was his brother though not him "the wounded beast". I'll keep that in mind too, him being an archer. Thank you!
not sure, just saying that in this world the people are able to divide a whole day into 30 hours, an hour into 90 minutes and so on. . . probably by looking how long sun is on the sky or something like the sundials in egypt
Hi, this is my very first time writing here, and on a whim too. So after publishing, and looking at what I had wrote, I thought I't could use some improvements, so I think I'll remake it. I have some time, as a student on summer vacation at home. So I think this is it for now.
It's amateur knight not knight trainee, my bad.
The last sentence it's supposed to be What he liked most. . . since it should be the narrator narrating, not the MC talking to himself. My first-ever novel and first chapter cut me some slack. hehe.
Wrong spelling again supposed to be "aimed the bow "
Wrong spelling supposed to be this happnes.