what a bad review, is every novel some sick power trip outlet for weebs, bust a nut for psychopathic anti hero loser that get butt hurt from one mean person and delete a whole clan because his sugar feeling got hurt. those for 10 12 yr olds.

if this is true I'll read, I'm sick and tired of psychopaths that came from a descent family but some how gets a taste of power and boom full on killer with zero morales..... seems to be popular with Korean and Chinese authors, I wonder why ......since their animes seem to be about heroes.

ya this dude is like I have to find my soul mate to lose my virginity, didn't realize actual men needed to find a soul mate or someone that moves their heart( ya sounds stupid but that's his logic in not hooking up with these girls) to find a girl se$ually attractive. but if author comes from a Asian country then I understand as in it makes sense.

this author chapter are so short only around 5k words no wonder after 300 hundred chapters the Mc is still a child. where most novels I read the have 7k to 9k word count. so 300 of this authors chapter are only worth a little over if not under 200 chapters compared to other authors.

hey the book is a good read on ch.363 but I'm having a hard time understanding the Mc. Author are u making your Mc an incel? yes he has 1 female friend but acts like he hate women finding him attractive says he is not ga8y but never mind. I get this isn't a romance novel or Heram but he is a 18yr old man at this point and should have interest in women in some fashion. other then that story has good pacing and then Mc isn't some psycho for the most part, will be interesting to see how you change that since he seems to be the type if someone he cares about dies he will no longer be neutral but evil and the day that happens I will drop this story.

just wanted to show my appreciation for the author, great book and thankful that you make your MC's with morality not the common hero but close. I'm tired of the rude jerks and murders and your books are a breath of fresh air so thank you. if I was rich I would fund u to continue writing such good novels I can't wait to read more novels with positive MC and maybe a classic rise of a hero novel.

I'm just trying to figure out if the Mc likes men, I mean the author goes into full detail on how men look but hardly ever or never on how the females look, and he treats women like they are gross even the one female friend he has. at chapter 500.

I think u got emotional development wrong, and seems more like emotional deterioration. I'm only on chapter 120 but he seems to be heading down the path of a mass murder. like most novels on this site they tend to love psychopaths and sociopaths even if their past lives had no trauma. guess in countries where they have very little power or freedom, that little hit of power they like " murder , murder , murder, kill , kill, kill you can't control me, I'm angry, muuurrrrrrr!".

another novel where the MC a smart a..s to everyone for no reason, not sure if it's a misguided attempt at humor but fails do to annoyance. but overall a good read if u ignore his interactions with people were he plays stupid.

on chp 80 came to see if anyone has had issue like me specially with chapt. having little content, but I this author is God and no bad reviews, or the delete god brought the apocalypse. very suspect.

I really enjoy this story but I don't understand, people in this story get very strong but no increase in lifespan? it even states that elves no matter where or what you read have very long life spans but author says their life span is 100yrs the same as humans, very confusing why get strong at all just to die with 80 to 100 yrs kinda pointless. but over all great story.

few chapters in and already hoping the Mc dies. was hoping this Auther wouldn't be a follower and have the Mc not be a moron and constantly call his system stupid and treat this thing that's gonna make him stronger and not the trash he is with more respect and appreciation. As a read further I hope he changes and the writer isn't some follow and more of a tread setter. people can dream.

I enjoy the story but man the author has to make up his mind on the MC romance. He says these girls are attractive amd his body even reacts to them by getting stimulated but then says he see's them are kids ok little pedo and his excuse for not really liking girls or even wanna a physical relationship is because when he was a kid he had an illness and was lonely thus s$x is not possible..... what! he can't love anyone cause he had a few hard yrs in the beginning. Author is you are going to make him an Immortal virgin stop leading us on.

I really was enjoying this story till the common theme hit. A bit of power and Mc becomes a psychopath, obsession with control, and not being control even if it's himself controlling himself, ya makes no sense yet that's his logic. he is a brat with power with bipolar disorder.

I agree with is review, only at page 90. I get the heroes that are all soft get boring however psychopaths all about killing and crying about how hard their lives are is annoying. being a jerk to everyone including those who genuinely are good is irritating to read, hypocrisy with turning into the very thing you hate and even worse gets old. However this is only my opinion at pg 90 and will continue to read to see further development. as of right now I view the MC as an anti social psychopath in the making but with his background understandable, I find myself hoping he gets beaten to death, lol.

enjoy the story but still a copy paste type feel, don't understand why the writes de ide on making their MC mentally sick and psychopathic why can MC just be normal and not kil.. kill I'm mad kill you, I'm sad kill you, talk bad to me kill you it's starting to make me not want to read this story, author it's okay for MCs to not kill everything and everyone around them.

I completely agree and his stability and back and further is starting to annoy me. like that drunk friend being happy then sad, flipping back and forth.

I really enjoy the novel, only 250 pages in however, I started disliking the MC and now I just hate the MC. The author was correct on MC description. Wish he was a bit more stable then I wouldn't wish for him to die. Hopefully further reading will change that.

(First, author why the sudden addiction to the backslash, we get it, they are making statements thats why you have quotations, but dang man you go way over board with backslashes) I enjoy this book however, it is a slow burn and inner dialog in main characters head can be overwhelming at time.

Great read, enjoy spending hours in bed reading his. However, it does annoy me a little and break the flow seeing the author constantly use "had had" instead of have had, ect.