RurlSky_Overlord
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RurlSky_Overlord3mthCommentedIn all honesty, this is by far one of if not the best first chapters I have read in the years that I've enjoyed this app. Your word choices and gramical expenditures are enticing to the mind and kept me consistently visualizing the story. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Thank you.
Ch 1 Life, Death, and Other Unusual Magic- RurlSky_Overlord1yrCommented
His Mom* :)
Ren gasped at the sight of her mom, who was supposed to be suffering from stroke and bedridden when his father died. - RurlSky_Overlord1yrReplied to AnWan
I can’t do it. The story is great I can see it clearly. However the grammar even after the “editing” is still very terrible in my opinion. I made it to chapter 115, at which point I concluded that I wouldn’t pay to read. Something no matter how good the story is, still needs proper telling aka grammer in this case in order to fully immerse the reader.
- RurlSky_Overlord2yrCommentedCh 1882 Welcome Home (Part 2)
- RurlSky_Overlord2yrCommentedCh 1348 Home and Grief (Part 2)
- RurlSky_Overlord2yrCommented
Idiot break it down for energy
"Alright, I'm done with this place. Let us head back to the Dark Fae Clan," Leon stated after recording a copy of the last runic engraving into the Archive. - RurlSky_Overlord2yrCommentedCh 703 Law Breaker
- RurlSky_Overlord2yrCommentedCh 498 The Rank Above Origin and Aurora?
- RurlSky_Overlord2yrCommentedCh 1 The Man Who Conquered All
- RurlSky_Overlord3yrCommentedCh 1 What’s the Use of Looking Good!