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Pj7722hCommentedpretty sure he said young, not small.....
Chi Shuyan had memories of her past life and could be considered an adult; she knew what the man meant with his look and that "not small anymore."- Pj7710dCommented
had? u don't anymore?
I had medium-long straight brown hair which I grew over my forehead in the front and fell over my left ear to the side, and I had dark green eyes and brown skin. I was wearing a dark blue hoodie and jeans, both very worn out, as were all my clothes. And I also wore a face mask whenever I went out, in order to hide my face...and also because the air in this place is filthy, and I literally can't afford to get sick since I have basically no money. - Pj7710dCommented
first sentence, present tense. The second sentence, and it's a very long run-on sentence, has both present and past tense. please pick a tense and watch out on run-on sentences... that one was almost the whole paragraph. .
I'm short and on the thin side, I wasn't very strong but I was confident in my speed and agility...which probably isn't a normal thing to say when introducing yourself, but I spend most of my life running away from angry white men, so 'normal' doesn't really apply to me. - Pj7717dCommented
earthly*
Avalina hugged her son tightly. Deep down, she knew Ashton had more responsibilities to worry about than just earth and his family. As a mother, taking care of the earthy problems was the least she could do to ease his worries. - Pj7717dCommented
were not* just mindless....
These skeletons were just mindless frames but could use mana and martial techniques. From mages to warriors to tanks and archers... the horde was nothing short of a proper army! - Pj7717dCommented"Control your breathing, close your eyes and visualise your creation," Vulcan's words echoed in Ashton's mind, "It's not your meat to beat randomly. Construct a path, a plan, before executing your will."
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A better part*
Ashton had given Nirvana a month before he would return to kick their asses into the afterlife. A better path of the month was over, and it would take the skeletons another week or so to find a suitable torso replacement for the Lizardman. - Pj7719dCommented
dependant *
"So either you do as I say, or this city of yours will be left in dust before the reinforcements you are so depended on ever get a chance to fire a bullet at us." - Pj7720dCommented
or-->over
Lastly, Nico would have a moral advantage over Ashton and the Ghosts as he was fighting for his people and country while Ashton, a mercenary, would be fighting for money and rewards. Hence, people throughout the galaxy would believe Nico's words or his. - Pj7721dCommented
rabbited rabbit??🤣🤣🤣 I do believe you meant RABID rabbit 😁
Back when he had lost everything to the werewolves, if someone would have told him the mistress got killed by one of her people, even he would have been happy. Hell, he would be jumping around like a rabbited rabbit... - Pj7722dCommented
ummm his thigh UP to his knee? 🤔🤔🤔
But the reflection wasn't done yet. Rather than pulling out the dagger, the reflection dragged the knife up to his knee, slicing the thigh in half. - Pj7722dCommented
anyone else wondering about the rest of the sentence? "however he wasn't as clueless as the rest of them because unlike the rest of the team. "......uhh left us hanging bc even the following sentence doesn't complete this one...
Ashton sighed as he rolled in his bed. His thoughts were getting a bit erratic by now. However, he wasn't as clueless as the rest of them because unlike the rest of the team. After all, he had a way to know whether the Phantom was his father or not and the only thing he needed to find that out was one look. - Pj7722dCommented
Leon* had been . .
He made a rookie mistake by trusting Leon's word... no, he couldn't have possibly been swayed by just his words, could he? He had heard rumours about Leon's ability but never got to test it himself. It could be possible Darjud had been manipulating him all along and he didn't even notice it. - Pj7723dCommented
seize--->ceased*
[Basically, if you had killed the Hydra before you were teleported out of there, that trial would have seized existing as well.] - Pj7723dCommented
impenetrable *
Frank lauhed the attack first, backed by Lycaon while Dracula stayed behind, supporting them as a spellcaster. Their lineup was perfect, Frank was an impretrable wall, Lycaon was in charge of the offence, while Dracula provide sustainability. It was clear even with their enhanced stats, they werenn't taking the fight lightly. - Pj7724dCommented
uh I thought the kid's name was Mona? or am I confused?
Then from the lane outside her apartment complex, came the sound of sirens and tires screeching on the lane. The cavalry was there to save the civilians. Natalie looked down at the blanket and release her hold of it. - Pj7724dCommented
throughout*
[Angel's blood is flowing without your body. It'll hurt, but you won't die as you possess my organs. They'll nullify your pain a bit. Do not let go of the crystal. Bite your lip and cling on to it.] - Pj7725dCommented
those two*
"If only those who would et along, conquering the continent wouldn't have been an impossible task." He sighed heavily. - Pj7725dCommented
wasn't * and if her forces were cut in half, wouldn't the ratio now be 15 to 1? still not good odds but better than 30 to 1....
Although the odds had increased in their favour quite a lot, they were still going to lose in a head-on fight. After all, 30 to 1 was a ratio anyone would be fond of. - Pj7725dCommented
realized*
Meanwhile, Ashton had finally managed to enter the deepest section of the catacombs, where the last Deull should be residing. However, he quickly released that he wasn't the first person to find the main room, judging from the skeletons scattered all over the place.