See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

i neeeeed more sooo bad

I'm so confused. why did the main characters parents switch to earth and water mages? you said they were fire and wind and that's why lightning was made, but now they are using earth and water magic

isn't that girl 14? this is kinda gross

does the main character ever get to actually use magic/get his own magic

I thought he leveled up mist of illusion to level 6 earlier in the vine fight?

am I the only one that feels bad for Gideon? like this man is soo toxicly attached and clearly mentally unstable.

honestly, it was a really good story. I tend to stay away from romance stuff because it makes me jealous and sad, but this story was incredibly written, and the whole thing just leaves me feeling happy

exactly this. I've never rooted for the main character to just be beaten up so much before. like it's cringy to even read it at this point for me.

I just want to say that I really do like this story, but I'm reaching a point where it's becoming unbearable to keep reading. and this is only because of the main character and his personality. how he treats people and acts. like the way he attacks people. especially the females with his shadow bullet and where he hits them with it. and then acts like he did nothing wrong and gets mad that people treat him badly after he did it. I don't know it's just something about his attitude that makes me want him to lose. makes me want him to get beaten up and die. and its sad because besides that I love this story.

am I the only one finding it weird that a little tree girl just appeared and everyone is treating this thing like it's their own child? like it doesn't seem realistic that they would just start calling this random kid their daughter. especially in a magic filled world. it could be a trap for all they know. or the trees way of staying alive and tricking them into not killing it. but it almost feels like yhe character are being mind controlled to love this kid like it their own. it feels soo forced

this is such a good story, but I do not have 100 dollars to read all the other chapters. the fact that a book can ask for 100 dollars to read it is crazy.

wish I saw this before spending all of my money on these chapters lol

I'm soo confused. what happened with the tournament??