Really like what you’re doing here, love the pacing as well as the main Character! Hope you continue this story long enough for you to cover some of the dark continent and the succession war arc, but this is your story so keep doing you!

i’m just gonna say that I am not a fan of the witcher...and yet u have me captured in your story, i don’t particularly have any reason to come back to this story....and yet here I am. U have made a story that attracts someone who isn’t interested in the witcher fall in love with ur story. Love ur story keep it up ‘Tis a real good story’

Love Ivar’s last moment, trapped in his own thoughts. u ended Ivar’s life very nicely and making him seem more human-like

Nice! Love that you’re making Fringilla appear «Human like» her decision, I would have done the same

I like this story a lot. i’ve been writing some fanfics myself and i can tell that u are putting in effort and love to your story...just dont burn yourself out, i’d hate to see a brilliant story like this go to waste

I like what ur doin here and I think u can make a good story that differs from the original plot. I think most people will like this story as long as u have schools involved as well as national tournaments I myself tried writing a jhujutsu kaisen fanfic but it's just too much to think about. I'm rooting for you and hope you'll take this story far [img=recommend]

Although I loved the story for its early chapters because of the realism, I don't hate what you've done with bringing supernatural powers into it. It started to get repetative and a little boring with the piracy and selling the merchandise, but you introduced this arc nicely timed Keep up the good work Nick

I want to deeply apologize for my last rude comment on one of the previous chapters. This is officially the best shit i've read in my life nocapp

love your story, and am having a blast reading it... But please don't tell me Gengyo becomes a fucking MONK, that would suck

¨HOLY SHIT. This mother****er is actually crazy. I'm on chapter 106, and from what I can tell as a novice fanfic writer is that this man has an awesome story to tell. Even if its creating an army and having big battles or just simply living an earnest life as a farmer, this author MAKES you emotionally invested in his story. And I may as well ad that this is the first story I have ever read that made me pay 5 bucks for more coins just so I could unlock chapters to read. Staying up to early morning just to read another chapter as my addiction grows and becomes an unhealthy obsession 10/10 best story i have ever read in my 1 year reading on this site

I’m sorry you didn’t like the chapter...AHMED😂😂😂😂

I don’t know how to pace my story, but once we get to their hatsus, you’ll be grinning

No. He will have the same power level as one would have in HxH. No one pice. No demon slayer. No naruto. Only HxH power scaling

Well he is talented but As he has not been training all his life he will have to train a lot with his nen

I can promise you That it Won’t be anything like a shitty system, I’m so tired of systems in novels