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I'm asexual, but even if I weren't, I can make a distinction between reality and fiction. Just because I kill thousands in game doesn't mean I want to go commit a genocide, just like how I enjoy reading FICTIONAL characters getting cucked and humiliated doesn't mean I want to get cucked, I guess you don't understand that though.
Filthy nonce.
While I understand that kingdom-building may not be the primary focus of the novel, completely neglecting this aspect can weaken the coherence of the story. Oftentimes, I've noticed that novels claiming to involve kingdom-building regardless of genre skip over important structural details in favour of more action, causing the storyline to become repetitive and disengaging for readers. Although I don't think it's necessary to heavily emphasize the kingdom-building aspect, I believe that including enough details is crucial for creating a believable world and engaging storyline. My intention isn't to undermine your work as you've done a great job thus far rather it's to offer well-structured advice on how to improve the story and make it more enjoyable for readers.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed your story so far. The slow corruption of the female characters was presented in great detail and with nuance, making it much more interesting than other stories that are more straightforward. I also appreciated the frequent updates, which kept me engaged with the story. While I haven't been able to comment on the kingdom-building aspect yet, I hope that you continue to maintain the same attention to detail as you progress the story. Many kingdom-building stories skip important details in favor of more action, but I believe that the intricate details are what make the story truly great. Finally, I would like to encourage you to continue writing this story and not let overly sensitive people discourage you. Readers who enjoy stories like this should be able to read them without harassment, and authors should be free to write what they want without fear of reprisal.
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but you missed the fact that time could run differently in there realm co.pared to the world MCs in like 1 year could be a couple million years in the realm there in or something like that
damn 100 septillion meetings that's crazy
I mean If I was forced to die thousands of times for illogical reasons I'd probably be the same
literally in a different world but ok you do you I guess
mature women are superior in every way change my mind
using the real names what a legend
kidnapped them obviously
imagine giving something a 1 star review due to the simple reason it doesn't conform to your personal preferences you either like what you read or you don't, don't degrade someone for writing something that you don't like hate to break it to you but the world doesn't revolve around you so just shut the fuck up, just like fucking feminists its either your opinion or no one opinion so annoying