Why would you turn your home into an amusement park

seriously you turn a world that barely knows schooling into a 21st century playground. They have guns and future tech, then you hint at a Disney World like them park and now we have snipers and night vision goggles

why do they have guns, these people are just teaching people how to use a bow.

WHY!!!!!!!!!!!! Why do authors have their character go to a world in midevil era and have them transform the world to be in 21st century

So he had no problem with oil refining and the introduction of machines but he had a problem with introducing textiles

If it had been 3 days and those dead soldiers' bodies were left out there animals would have come and ate them because of the smell of blood would attract them

Wait he has the ability to give people new memories now? Why didn't he do that before the war and have them leave?

Why would you give bulldozers and tractors to people who can barely ride a horse and buggy

Why go this rout? Everytime a character goes to a different world and they incorporate their ideas to bring a set of people to a higher era than they are? I get you can upgrade somethings but you went from a medevil era to them having cannons and bypassing small explosives and dynamite to now having people who have no idea what soap is to them processing oil?

Why is he talking about having airplanes and cars, as well as amusement parks? He is in a midevil era world.

How is Loren the number 1 ranked Summoner? Ian is a much higher character and with his pets that are higher tier class as well he should be the top

Why would he use Summon Release? If he used that his pets would be returned to the wild, why not use return or recall? And where is the other skills he was using before?

Story was ok but the MC was not really relatable. There were times when you thought the game would notify him he did something but wasn't there.

It is so hard to read this. Author needs an English editor to do some grammar work.

What senior goes to prison?

Story is great, I love the characters and the struglle the Main Character is having. But the grammar is a slight problem but it isn't a super problem. Really hope the author finishes this and not turn into like other authors who leave a story.

Story is good but it has grammar problems but they aren't super bad

Has promise but it feels kinda rushed in parts. But feels like a good story

I was kinda confussed when this came into my stories when I did a search for MMORPG stories. But after reading I was still confussed because the MC is suppose to become immortal by becoming a blacksmith.

Story is good but diffenitly need to get an editor