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mank_0072dCommentedno Restoration?
"Professor, there are 8 schools of magic. They are the School of Warding, Summoning, Divination, Enchantment, Invocation, Illusion, Alteration, and finally Necromancy."- mank_00722dCommented
missing strengthen
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this wasn't a tome tho. just stated he created this skill
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why doesn't he read books about I don't know battle strategy and tactics, combat techniques, mana manipulation techniques, swordmandship, tactics, gates, mage tactics, different monsters found in gates, psychological warfare, psychology and sociology .etc. his literal class is about knowledge. 😒
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doesn't want to be noticed and hides mage skills, but proceeds to solo a dungeon? does he not think he's gonna draw a lot of attention, bringing back a mountain of corpses plus a boss by himself? never understood the whole hide powers trope. and let me guess his gonna have a separate identity too. but ok 😒
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mantle?
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he doesn't have to cast spells under rank 1 remember?
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Leonel?
He looked toward the old couple who seemed even more shaken now. Just how much did Ryu know, exactly? - mank_0071mthCommentedThey all began shattering like glass, crumbling into bits of crystalline pieces! Even his hands, legs, and…
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ok? doesn't mean he truly loved her.....because like I said, if he truly loved her, he would love her child too. he's literally the last piece of her that's alive. same thing with Snape in Harry Potter. He hated Harry's father but loved Lily, and even after she died, he cherished her memory and even looked after Harry (in his own way) and protected in the end.
Anger bubbled within him, but it quickly subsided when he remembered that he had already exacted his revenge by allowing the child she had with Lyrius J. Khaleji to be put in harm's way. - mank_0071mthCommented
so the body was taken over twice?? once as a baby and again when he's older?
The soul in the body of his nephew wasn't Valerius's; it belonged to someone else, while Valerius's own soul seemed to have vanished. This change should have taken place after the kidnapping. Even he could see that. It meant his brother should also be aware of that. - mank_0071mthCommented
so far, I'm digging this. grammar is top-notch. mc isn't overly arrogant, doesn't have anger issues, doesn't bully have a revenge-psychotic murder mentality (hopefully), and stories not all over the place. good pacing and story building. author knows what direction he wants to go, and the story reflects that. great work so far.
Ch 7 Ch 7: The True Scheme - mank_0071mthCommented
then he didn't truly "love" her. he would have done anything in his power to protect the last piece of her.
Anger bubbled within him, but it quickly subsided when he remembered that he had already exacted his revenge by allowing the child she had with Lyrius J. Khaleji to be put in harm's way. - mank_0071mthCommented
maybe not "see" but "sense" or maybe "felt" here. the whole world wouldn't able to see it with the earth being round and all.
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to poison you?
The question was, what did Professor Obel want? - mank_0071mthCommented
*shape
The two Force Arts took shame and two, roaring lasers of gold slammed into him. - mank_0072mthReplied to HollyLou92
It is technically an answer and a statement. it's a true statement and honest answer to the question.
After all, one didn't have to lie to deceive a person. Sometimes, truth was the best material for creating deceit. - mank_0073mthCommented
*Quinn puts items in shadow. *shrugs shoulders."What gear?"
"However, the armour will only be lent to you for this task. If we were to give a God Slayer so much power, it would be troublesome." - mank_0073mthCommented
die 💁🏾♂️
'He can stop my attacks… and he has different types of bullets. Qi won't work, dhampir energy won't work. So what am I meant to do!!!' Erin thought. - mank_0073mthCommented'I wonder if it's because of the Basic Healing Potion.'