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Kittycat11232yrCommentedNot gonna lie, Trinityās powers/positions is a little much at this point. I feel like just having her being the reincarnate moon goddess/queen of shifters was enough, at this point she might as well be the ruler of the entire fantasy world, basically what Edmond is trying to be, but the complete opposite version. I mean still love that sheās going to be really REALLY strong, but I feel like itās a bit too overwhelming at this point.
Ch 182 Chapter 57- Trinity - Unexpected (VOLUME 2)- Kittycat11232yrReplied to Jessica_Leccese
Yeah I kind of agree lol, itās a little much š I feel like just having her being the queen of shifters was more than enough, but at this point it seems like sheās going to be the successor to like the god/goddess of almost every single race in the fantasy world š
"I do." Thoth smiled as he looked at me. - Kittycat11232yrCommented
I think you need a comma after āGreetingsā
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Cool that the warlocks worship an Egyptian god! For some reason I thought the god they look up to would be another a god European legend/story instead of from Egypt š¤ļø
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And maybe change it to āa vague man-shaped formā Maybe instead of āformingā you could use ācreatingā so you wouldnāt have to use āformā twice
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You should probably take out the āAndā and just put a comma before āforming aā¦ā
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I think itās āhigher and higherā missing the āerā on the second āhighā
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I think you should add a hyphen in between āparchment-likeā
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I think you missed the ālikeā in between āIt did indeed look justā¦ā āthe designā
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I think itās āall at onceā
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Lol I totally get you, I guess the only one I can think of is the little girl Eri from BNHA, like maybe Trinityās situation is like her, if she uses it randomly it might go out of control š¤ļø
Ch 181 Chapter 56- Trinity - Time To Prepare For Another Attempt At Locating The Kids (VOLUME 2) - Kittycat11232yrCommented
I think you should put hyphens in between āsecond-in-commandā
After a loud and boisterous breakfast with the whole group in the resort's largest dining room, we met with Crawford and Eldrige to discuss what we needed to do. I had learned that Crawford was the High Warlock, the leader, of the magic council. And Eldrige acted sort of like his second in command. There were a few people on similar levels with Eldrige, but he seemed to be the one that dealt with Crawford the most. Henrich and Lionel were Eldrige's subordinates and acted as attendants in most situations. The hierarchy of the magical world or warlocks and witches was kind of feudal and outdated. - Kittycat11232yrCommented
Ouch, Iām feel so bad about the babyā¦Iām honestly so mad that Edmond basically caused this and killed another life, man if this sh*tty war wasnāt going on they wouldnāt have to suffer like this. Ugh now I wish I had Nobaraās Resonance ability (from Jujutsu Kaisen) lol then I could inflict some damage on Edmond
Ch 180 Chapter 55- Both - How To Heal A Broken Heart (VOLUME 2) **WARNING! CAN BE EMOTIONALLY TRIGGERING OR TRAUMATIZING TO SOME** - Kittycat11232yrCommented
I think you can just remove ātheā from blood and just have it be āthat amount of pain and bloodā
"I don't call that amount of pain or the blood nothing." I tried my best to convince her of my point, but she didn't seem swayed. - Kittycat11232yrCommented
I think you forgot Rawlynne?
Everyone who had been present and knew about the baby. Those who lost almost as much as I did with the loss of my baby. Juniper, Noah, Carter, Vincent, David, Shawn, Shane, Dietrich, Paul, Cedar. All these people were part of my daily life. They knew that they would be part of my child's daily life.Ā - Kittycat11232yrCommented
Oh and also Ella and her mom tooā¦basically anyone that Trin gave a ābabyās coming/Iām pregnantā gift to š¢
Everyone who had been present and knew about the baby. Those who lost almost as much as I did with the loss of my baby. Juniper, Noah, Carter, Vincent, David, Shawn, Shane, Dietrich, Paul, Cedar. All these people were part of my daily life. They knew that they would be part of my child's daily life.Ā - Kittycat11232yrCommented
Oh no, now that makes me wonder how grandpa, Lila and her parents are going to reactā¦š° they have to tell them sooner or later
Everyone who had been present and knew about the baby. Those who lost almost as much as I did with the loss of my baby. Juniper, Noah, Carter, Vincent, David, Shawn, Shane, Dietrich, Paul, Cedar. All these people were part of my daily life. They knew that they would be part of my child's daily life.Ā - Kittycat11232yrCommented
And Dietrich is pronounced ādee-trikā if I remember correctly
Reece assigned rooms of importance to people based on their status and importance to us. So the high ranking warlocks were assigned better rooms, as were my personal guards and friends. And of course those with mates present were given rooms to themselves, so Juniper and Paul were together, as were Rawlynne and David, and of course Dietrich and Shawn. - Kittycat11232yrCommented
Iāve been wondering how you pronounce Rawlynne?
Reece assigned rooms of importance to people based on their status and importance to us. So the high ranking warlocks were assigned better rooms, as were my personal guards and friends. And of course those with mates present were given rooms to themselves, so Juniper and Paul were together, as were Rawlynne and David, and of course Dietrich and Shawn. - Kittycat11232yrCommented
Is āTheā part of the resort name?
"Good afternoon." He smiled when he was close enough to us. "My name is Francis and I'd like to welcome you to The Tiger Lily Resort." His smile didn't falter but I saw his eyes widen when he noticed the blood that covered both me and Reece.