I'm just tired of his ups and downs, accept the woman, love her, you dont need the feeling on your emotions to know you love her, and take her back with you, quit running away from your fears, accept that they are being taken away and fight back. roar its annoying.

glocks dont have standard safeties, its 2 step trigger does the job, so reading he took off the safety on a glock was kinda silly lol

I keep seeing hidden class, but a it's an awakening, wouldn't that be advanced class instead. I would think a hidden class is one you unlock mysterious ways later.

same, been a while since I've seen them in a book as well, last one was the iron druid chronicles

if lv is gonna be displayed as [level: lv4] then get rid of the lv in front of the number, it can be confusing and ad a space lv 4 or lv 17 in places that dont show stats, it helps in the long run

You show his stats at the end, but you didn't put in his 10 magic power bonus for being a mage. Thought I would note that for later proof reading.

Melting metal and melding together is known as welding, not soldering. soldering is used on electrical components or low melting metals. soldering can be reversed through melting, welding has to be cut.

I'm not a writer myself, but i give you props on what ive read so far, this story had kept me entertained and interested, and i love the aspect of it feeling like reality, it hits the best out of some of the ones ive read where look, your in a full dive game, meens should be more realistic but yet everyone knows how to fight just fine. so this is something i can enjoy.

Yeah, I wouldn't change it, its a reflection of how yo have evolved as a writer and what you have accomplished since the beginning.

i know this has been going for a little bit, but i had to ask, Why are Sun Elves main attribute intellect, but their bonus attribute is strength, I would expect the bonus attribute to be Intellect if their race Empathizes it.

in the last chapter she had blue eyes

When i think about it, out of combat, if Kyle spends a lot of time crafting, he is going to lvl up pretty fast. I do have a question, you call them spears, but the length of a goblin leg is to short for a spear, is it perhaps a spear head and he is attaching a wooden shaft to make it longer?

Thanks for another good one, *smacks Max* learn to speak with a softer tone.

hope he finds more crafting books and recipes

woo. its getting there

looking forward to a fellow crafter, *puts all them bits and bobs together to make the perfect item*

exp farm for the win