A lover of good novels
The art isn’t the best but you can see improvement in the art after about 30 chapters and after 100, the quality in art is on par with multi-artist comics. The story and character development are where this comic shines. You can see the character growth in power (yes, of course his system is OP but at least it has flaws like needing stones with energy that aren’t easy to find). You also see the foreshadowing of those who may or may not be his enemies. Those who follow the MC (except for 1 ) are doing it because they see the greatness in him. In fact, I think if his “slave” spirit being was given freedom at this moment , they wouldn’t want it. I am really enjoying this comic. It would make a pretty good LN or WN. I can’t wait to see where things go from here.
90% of this book is filler. The author uses the last paragraph of each chapter as the first paragraph of the next chapter. Plus the MC is always checking their status and by chapter 100, the status of the MC is nearly a full chapter. I know they are only doing it to hit the word count but I’m tired of paying for two paragraphs of story with the rest of the chapter filled with the status checks by the MC. Chapter 380-381 are especiallly bad. And then there is the repetitive BSDM porn chapters that add nothing to the story. At least the author admits it up front with a disclaimer before the R18+ sections. I’m thoroughly disappointed. The book started out well and then rapidly went downhill
Seriously? Enough with the pages and pages of status. I’m tired of paying for two paragraphs with the rest filled wit the status. The last 2 chapters are 90% staatus. This is on top of you repeating the last paragraph of each chapter as the first paragraph of the next chapter. 99% of this book seems to be bs filler.
Let start by saying I dinged the author on updating stability since its been a while since we have had any updates (between chp 292-293I suspect the author went on vacation but didn’t leave a note. That being said, this book is great. The character building is top notch. The fact that the MC has multiple personalities who talk to each other makes their arguments hilarious . Plus its used as a plot point to explain that while the MC is OP, he cant use all his power at the same time because his personalities are the ones that know how to use a particular power so his personality switches depending on the situation. Its like have 4 very different MCs in one. One is super shy yet blood thirsty to the point where he terrifies the others, one is cold and analytical , another is a flirt and con artist always looking for that next score or scam and then we have our normal hero. The world building is cool. I love his mysterious master who’s a pervert that basically tortures him in the name of training. The biggest plus of this novel is the character development. You truly get a feel for what motivates the MC and all his companions. There is no harem(Thank God) although girls like him. I highly recommend this book. I have been trying to motivate the author by spending coins and voting for the book. Hopefully my dastardly plan works.
Wow! I was pleasantly surprised by this book. I actually clicked on it by mistake and read the first couple of chapters without knowing what the story was going to be about. I was hooked and after spending several hours and more coins than I care to count, I have caught up with the author. The characters are well developed , the interactions between the characters are great. who hasnt had a boss that only wants people people who suck up to them. Keep up the great work! More please! Draw faster! My coins are burning a hole in my wallet!
I just finished Gacha Sovereign and decided to check this out. Of you havent read Gacha Sovereign by fixten, you should go read it now Its complete and its great. The MC in this book isnt your typical weakling to strong or your typical arrogant MC? He’s intelligent , diligent and sneaky. Although he needs more experience to become a true trickster, I’m looking forward to his growth . My only wish is that there were more chapters. I managed to catch up to the author in 2 days. [img=faceslap]