I really like your world building, it's sometimes a little slow but it isn't overwhelming and this other serpent clan introduction feels just right now. Th for the chapters.
Yea it would be nice if there were something that shows who talks, but just wanted to write it down that it really nice to get some insight on other characters other than the mc.
It's fine anyway just wanted to say that I really like this type of development so far getting a merchant face and everything really curious about the future chapters anyway Happy Easter!!!!