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Dosilli

Dosilli

Lv14

A different perspective

2020-01-03 JoinedUnited States
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    At this point i need u to have a patreon link or something so i can get more chapters

    Ch 73 I Don't Care.
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    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    i need like ten chapters next release please

    Ch 71 Bearing Gifts
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Posted

    A good idea for a story, with some decent potential for long term writing but it is filled with too many holes, and the characters could use some more substance..

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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    a top agent from a secret organization, revealed herself to fight, scolded her target, openly talked about her mission and organization, showed them her face and then proceeded to agree to teach him and move in? That doesn’t make any sense and is unreasonable unless this is a very weak and pitiful organization but thats not how you’ve been describing them so far…

    Ch 43 Chapter 43 - Arrangement
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! Can’t wait for the next one

    Ch 56 The Course
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    whats the release rate gonna be going forward? enjoying the story.

    Ch 226 Fenriri Wants To Save Food
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    Really good concept, and writing ability, but there’s nothing to keep the reader hooked long term, and the mc acts too much like a child given that he’s a former assassin which doesn’t make sense. Droping for now 😪

    Ch 9 Chapter 8 - Exhausted
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    Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    thanks for da chap

    Ch 54 Suspicions
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    Finley- The Lost Prince
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter...kindly requesting the next one..

    Ch 53 The Sealing
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    Finley- The Lost Prince
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    finally!!

    Ch 51 Follow me
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    Appreciate the chapter, looking forward to the next one

    Ch 49 Cornered
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli2yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 47 Grounded
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli3yr
    Commented

    Almost thought this was dropped. Awaiting the next chapter!

    Ch 40 Act
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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli3yr
    Replied to Chuklz70

    Hmm I’ll consider it, but for now I’m happy with the current system. I appreciate the suggestion though.

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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli3yr
    Replied to Chuklz70

    Remember the comprehension skill that Jaba has gives him knowledge regarding a lot of things. He was always aware of the passing of days, but he still doesn’t know the exact time of day and he’s not even aware of it!

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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli3yr
    Replied to Chuklz70

    Nun of that r*pe stuff. But I’ll tryto be unique as much as possible in a goblin isekai novel.

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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli3yr
    Replied to Chuklz70

    First of all thanks for reading, and even taking the time out to comment on it! I appreciate it. To respond to your comments though, this is my very first real attempt at writing anything and you'll find a lot of hiccups along the way. I think the later chapter are a lot better in terms of quality. Thanks again for reading and providing your opinions!

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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli3yr
    Replied to Book_seeker

    Yes there will be eventually

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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli3yr
    Replied to slimeysocks12395

    No it is not purpose.

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  • Dosilli
    Dosilli3yr
    Commented

    Bu the way thank you for your support! I took a small break from writing, but the next chapter is complete, It’ll be posted soon!

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