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a top agent from a secret organization, revealed herself to fight, scolded her target, openly talked about her mission and organization, showed them her face and then proceeded to agree to teach him and move in? That doesn’t make any sense and is unreasonable unless this is a very weak and pitiful organization but thats not how you’ve been describing them so far…
Hmm I’ll consider it, but for now I’m happy with the current system. I appreciate the suggestion though.
Remember the comprehension skill that Jaba has gives him knowledge regarding a lot of things. He was always aware of the passing of days, but he still doesn’t know the exact time of day and he’s not even aware of it!
First of all thanks for reading, and even taking the time out to comment on it! I appreciate it. To respond to your comments though, this is my very first real attempt at writing anything and you'll find a lot of hiccups along the way. I think the later chapter are a lot better in terms of quality. Thanks again for reading and providing your opinions!
No it is not purpose.
Bu the way thank you for your support! I took a small break from writing, but the next chapter is complete, It’ll be posted soon!