chakra

the surge of character and screaming alerted several guards

I like this story so far but some the sentence structure keeps ruining my enjoyment because some sentences don't make much sense

it's good but wish some of the sentences were sentenced better for example the flight took hours instead of the travel took hours

at least it not another gluttony skill that steals skills

good story needs grammar corrections

Good story so far keep up the good work👍

More please

Thanks for the great chapter 👍

Thanks for the new chapter 👍

Thanks for the chapter👍

Keep up the good work 👍

Thanks for the great chapter hope you will start writing again.👍

Not bad so far continue the good work 👍